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Correct me , please.It's a little story writted for me.
Hello , I writted that a little resume from a short animated film https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gVhd6kqzUd4. Now I'm b1 so I have bad grammar and I don't know how to use the grammar times.
One day a little child from <font style="background-color: yellow;">boyscouts was</font> on a fieldtrip<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> He was<font style="background-color: yellow;"> looking like</font> a red dragon <font style="background-color: yellow;">flying</font> with his magnifying glass<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font>Then a grownup called the little child but the he didn't walk with that grownup because he <font style="background-color: yellow;">saw</font> some <font style="background-color: yellow;">mysterious</font> purple ligh<font style="background-color: yellow;">t.</font> Then he <font style="background-color: yellow;">walked in other way</font> ,he fainted when he <font style="background-color: yellow;">walked through that new way</font> .That new <font style="background-color: yellow;">way</font> was <font style="background-color: yellow;">the</font> Cavemen era.
The little kid <font style="background-color: yellow;">saw</font> two cavemen ,but one of those cavemen hit the little kid with his club <font style="background-color: yellow;">so</font> the kid fainted again and the caveman dragged the kid<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> Then those cavemen had an argument about the little kid. <font style="background-color: yellow;">One</font> caveman wanted to be his friend but the other wanted to eat that kid.The hairly caveman <font style="background-color: yellow;">threaten the</font> other caveman <font style="background-color: yellow;">that</font> if they didn't eat that kid ,he <font style="background-color: yellow;">would</font> eat him<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> Then he hits the other caveman and the caveman fainted.
The hairly caveman <font style="background-color: yellow;">chased</font> the little kid because he wanted to eat him <font style="background-color: yellow;">but a</font> T-rex appeared and It chased <font style="background-color: yellow;">both</font> the little kid and the hairly caveman<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> The another caveman woke up after.
Then the three guys ran away from the t-rex ,they climbed up <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> tree and to <font style="background-color: yellow;">be out</font> of its reach of the t-rex, but the t-rex <font style="background-color: yellow;">isn't</font> dumb<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> It <font style="background-color: yellow;">approached</font> from the tree and then hit <font style="background-color: yellow;">it</font> with his head and <font style="background-color: yellow;">one</font> caveman <font style="background-color: yellow;">fell</font> because the branch <font style="background-color: yellow;">broke</font>.
But the other caveman helped<font style="background-color: yellow;"> his friend</font> ,he wraped around with the liana the t-rex' neck<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> Then the little kid also <font style="background-color: yellow;">fell from</font> the branch and the branch <font style="background-color: yellow;">burned</font> and he wrapped around the t-rex' neck and the t-rex get out.
The hairly caveman wanted to be friend to the little kid because they went through a difficult situation together.very nice story
0 votedMay 26, 2018030 Days Challenge - Chapter 19
<font style="background-color: yellow;">Me</font> and some of my friends went to a restaurant which sells homemade hamburgers<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font>It was such a great time. We just went there to commemorate <font style="background-color: yellow;">one of our friends' birthday</font>. We had so much fun together. So long time no one there sees each other<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font>I almost could not go because the buses are not working all right<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font>0 votedMay 26, 20180

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