simple journal, please help me about (with) my writting (writing).
13/08/2017 Grace’s Journal
This weekend ， the 2 days
are (were)* all rainy.
on Friday night ,there
has (was) a big thunder storm, when I came back to my room after work, I found out there
are (was) a lot of water on the floor, but I am pretty sure when I
go (went) to work, I closed the window, and I checked it again, it
does (was) closed, maybe it
's ** because the rain is too heavy. It
takes (took) me 1 hour to clean the floor, and the hard wood floor seemed to be bump up .
on Saturday morning , I went to the park for
morning exercising (a morning exercise), I saw
there has (were) 3 trees pulled out of the groud (ground),
even I can
even see the root of the tree.
* Though not incorrect grammatically, it sounds strange, because you're talking about the past two days.
** A verb was needed here
Most of your mistakes seem to be that you change your tense and not being sure when to use "to be". Try to pay attention to that next time. All in all it's a good text though. Keep up the good work!
