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    A Woman's Power

    These years, we've been talking about women's rights. However, some incident on the Internet about sexual assault still hurt me. There is no doubt that women are not <s>be</s> respected totally. Behind each case, whether the judiciary is fair to the public or not and why these cases keep happening. Maybe people aren't aware that what they're doing is illegal, or even flagitious. For the victim, it can almost ruin her life. I do expect everyone to behave themselves and create a harmonious environment.
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    April 10, 2020
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    Company not pay my salary -10/04/2020

    I am a sales manager in real estate in Zodi Plaza in Chongqing, China. It's located at the third largest business center in Chongqing City. I joined the company <s>has</s> 5 months ago and I do a lot of work for my job. For example, sell about 30% of residential and commercial real estate in the team in December last year.
    The company haven't paid my salary for the 3 months because my boss moved the company money to his own wallet. I have no idea why he hasn't paid my salary in such a long time, so I contacted our government for help. But many government workers want their money back too. In the end of March I filed with the Labour Bureau. The government need 60 work days to solve the problem. I feel that's a long time for me .
    Today is very sad for me when another member of our team got their salary but I didn't. So I talked with HR to find out the reason why. She told me about the cancer case from the Labour Bureau. That's so crazy when I heard what she said. Why did the boss break the law and wasn't afraid? I think the most important reason is that it would cost him a smaller amount of money to not pay me.
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    April 10, 2020
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    April 10, 2020
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    Hi guys can u check it please?

    Today is the 4th time, but God knows deeply about what I face. Thank you God for Your sacrifice, I made a lot of mistakes but You constantly stay beside and absolve me.
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    April 10, 2020
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    What are some of the things you find difficult to do?

    Please correct me

    I was a shy person in that I was not good at giving a speech and talking to strangers. Both of those two things were very difficult things for me, even though I was a grown-up.

    I chose a part-time job as a salesperson who promoted cosmetics and skincare. At work, I had to interact with any passers-by and potential customers, pushing them to experience the look, feel and personality of my product, increasing sales and enhancing brand awareness.

    Certainly, I often faced various challenges due to that I am too shy to talk with a stranger like a friend, but those experiences changed my personality more and more.

    The job was not well-paid and was not always very interesting. To be honest, a job in an office might be my dream job, but I learned a lot of valuable experiences from it, including acute insight, communication skills, good judgement, and so on.

    Though I am a little shy now, it does not serve as before. I am still too shy to give a speech, but can now talk more to strangers because of it. I believe that the part-time job helped me gain confidence and make me more familiar with the society.
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    April 10, 2020
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    Please check my notebook

    Please check any mistakes in my writing---

    One positive thing about the corona pandemic is that for one month no bombs have been dropped onto any residential areas from warplanes. No high explosives from any tanks have reduced a house to rubble. Nor has a child got lost at sea or floated dead on the bank while having to flee across the sea as a refugee. Before death, no child has had to be crying, "I'm gonna complain to Allah."
    It is Allah who knows everything, hears everything. Neither slumber nor sleep overtakes Him. When He catches up with someone (out of wrath), none in the universe is capable of rescuing them.
    We, so far, overlooked their cries of anguish. We remained silent to watch them dying. They died from starvation. Nevertheless, our conscience did not prick us. How ever can we avoid our responsibility? And today this little microscopic virus has made us surrender!
    May Allah absolve us from the sins we committed. May He bless us all and save our beloved ones, families, friends and neighbours.
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    April 9, 2020
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    The New Order of Living

    Nobody could entirely answer why the long and cruel winter had come, apart from the chantry, they hadn't the need to even answer the question, they just had the response. They were declaring about God's punishment but before long people arranged the strike against them because they didn't want to feed people who did nothing. The set of the old holiday vanished and new ones arose. Two of the most important holidays became the New Year and the 1st of May, where people painted the town red, merely because they had a day off. The first years were the worst, people lived without vegetables and in shortage of everything, but eventually, it became possible to maintain the healthy standard of living. It was hard times, but everybody struggled to strive for the better life and it united people.
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    April 9, 2020
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    Revision of this story, Pls.

    "The Sign of Four" is one of the stories based on Sherlock Holmes.
    Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in London and for him his work was a very important thing in his life.
    At <s>the</s> first the story told about Watson who was Sherlock’s friend and also an important helper with his cases.
    In the past Watson worked as a doctor in the British Army then in a mission he nearly died and so he decided to retire himself and came back to England.
    It was a boring day when a woman went to<s> the</s> Holmes’s house to speak with him.
    Miss Morston lost her father many years ago but recently she received a letter with the invite to come to the theatre without the police, and here she'll meet the writer of the letter.
    So she wanted the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where her father was and also she wanted to know why she received <s>even year </s>a pearl from a mysterious man. Was there a connection with these two things?
    Therefore they went to the meeting at the theatre and after that they followed the man who brought them to <s>the </s>Thaddeus Sholto’s house.
    Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father.
    Thaddeus told that <s>the</s> Miss Morston's father died after a terrible argument with his father. The argument was about the discovery of the Agra Treasure that they got together some years ago.
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    April 8, 2020
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    Autumn

    When the first leaf has fallen, we know that Autumn is coming. The Autumn breeze accompanied with yellow or gold red leaves dance on the road, under the tree, in the forest or anywhere they would like to. Once they stop dancing, they will become mud to nourish the future generations. So, maybe this is their last dance.
    Have you ever seen dew hanging on the grass, especially during a foggy morning? The sun slowly rises up, it’s light crosses the layers of clouds and then shines on these transparent pearls, and suddenly, the grass has been awarded a medal. How beautiful the morning<s> it</s> is! This is spring.😂😂
    To be continued...
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    April 7, 2020
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    An interesting experience

    Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks!

    On a national day in 2018, I went to a very beautiful scenic spot with my classmates. Under the hill, there were many people selling fruit. Mango is that city’s famous fruit. Their mangoes are very huge. I bought a mango and an apple there. They were packed in a plastic bag. And then I climbed the mountain with the plastic bag in my right hand. When we were climbing the mountain, we discussed if we could meet monkeys. We have heard that some monkeys grab tourists’ cameras. When we got halfway up the mountain, we took a short break and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Suddenly a monkey behind me rushed towards my direction and grabbed my plastic bag. It sat on the ground eating the mango calmly. It is so clever that it bit off the skin of the mango and ate the flesh. I was scared and frightened. Fortunately, it didn’t attack me. Meanwhile, I was excited because I saw the monkey eating the mango. It’s interesting. All of us took pictures around it.
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    April 7, 2020
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