Describing a picture in English, please correct my writing. #5 1. A tiger is lying on the bricks 2. The tiger seems like he is sleeping. 3. There is a stone pillar cut on the bricks

Describing a picture in English, please correct my writing. #4 1. An in-ear headphone is laid on the floor. 2. This earbud seems to be old. 3. The earbud is covered with dust.

Describing a picture in English, please correct my writing. #3 1. People looks like they are joining a night party. 2. Three people are main characters of this photo. 3. Two of them excluding a woman in a pink jacket on the right side is taken blurred. 4. It seems that the party is being held on a rooftop of building.

describing a picture in English, please correct my writing. #2 1. An animal seems to yell at someting. 2. He or she looks like hiding in the grass. 3. A big tree is seemed to fall down on the ground in front of the animal.

I describe a picture in English, please correct my writing. 1. A big elephant is walking down the river Thames, which is in London. 2. You can see the birds flying around the elephant. 3. The sun has gone and it looks like the night is coming.

Dialogue#1 Hi, my name is Han. Today I am going to tell you my job. I do medical sales of ethical drugs in Korea. I have been working in my company since November last year. I covers semi-hospitals located in Gang-nam, which is a popular attractions for tourists. My working hours mostly is 9 to 6. And what I do mostly in my working time is that I meet my clients who is doctors, letting them prescribe our company's drugs. Also, I try to make a relationship with my clients not only for my business. In my opinion, salesperson does want to make a friendship with clients so that they would do sales more easily. My goal is to make a personal partner for my own business in the future. I hope I could make it within 5 years.

My workday last week I do Medical sales in Korea and I am a new recruit of my company. Last week, I took a field training for the first time with my superiors. It is simple. You go to a hospital and ask nurses if you can take a short meeting with doctors. Five minutes are average times meeting doctors. You should share many information that you can attract your clients. It is door to door sales and I know it's pretty hard. Job seekers are reluctant to apply for this field. But, I want to prove myself doing great job at this hard area, improving sales skills and leading to get promotions.