She (please correct my mistakes thanks)

My mother gave birth to me when she was twenty eight years old.me birth when she twenty eight years old. She had little education,but she know many has a lot of knowledge that surprises me!  make me surprise! I think my mother is beautiful,  even more than me. She has big eyes,her eyes are very clear and bright, so this is why my dad loves her she. My mother is very nice ,often asking for me how to deal with interpersonal relationship. I and my mother and I are like friends. I am happy that I have a pretty and considerate mother.

Great job Lyn! :)

Hello, I could help you improve your English:) Send me a message.

A post in a social net about my bday and some more.

I host meetings in an English speaking club in Moscow, Russia. And I am writing posts about how they went. I'd like to learn how to write properly in English as mistakes are bad for my reputation. So here is one of the posts.

Last week I had a birthday, but I didn't plan anything for a celebration on Friday. Usually I do. And though nothing was prepared, when I came to the break at about 9pm somebody switched off the lights. I was like "What a... why, what happened??" I completely forgot! And the waitress brought in the cake!! Wow!!! My friends planned the celebration for me, without me knowing about it! So awesome! Like in the series! Thank you so much!!

For the second time in a row on Friday Pete came. He is from Chicago, US. A very interesting guy in a suit with a clear American pronunciation. A big fan of Jazz music. Last Friday we talked about tolerance in America. After his stories I wanted to exclaim "God Bless Russia!". We are living in a wonderful country, where you can easily call a waitress waitress and not a female waiter, but sorry I am being sexist here.

The other Friday two Frenchmen came. They were amazing, very polite and nice and surprisingly did not have  thick French accents. Though it was clear they love France and are very patriotic towards French language. They came from Paris to visit Moscow for a week or so. One was Pierre and the other Olivie. It is a special word for a Russian, isn't it?) Olivie was impressed with wide Moscow streets and told about censorship in European mass media and anti-Russian propaganda. Censorship in Europe? What??
Seriously, every time I speak to a foreigner I seem to appreciate life in Russia (in Moscow at least) more and more. Life is not so bad here! Ask foreigners :))

P.S. FYI (For your information) Nobody in the world knows such a salad as Olivie salad. It is named Olivie in Russia only. Everywhere in the world it is called Russian salad ;)

Great job Anton!  In the first paragraph, instead of "about how did they go"  we would say "how they went":) We also usually write out "second" and not 2nd. It is spelled " completely", but your article was very good!

First day at the new job

Today was my first day at my new job. I'm going to be a waitress at a five star resort. The organization there is pretty impressive, they have a huge laundry where our uniforms are cleaned and tidied. The employees don't have to clean their uniforms by themselves. And if it's necessary give a hand in a different hotel's restaurant, we have to go to the laundry and change the uniform. I'm astonished with all this stuff!
At the same time I'm quite disappointed with the training, or better saying "nonexistence" of training. I hope that this bad impression will be removed tomorrow... I am the kind of person who learns fast but I must be taught!

Great job Tailaine! 

My family

My family consists of my father- a man who is a dedicated writer , my mom is a seller and my big brother  is  a systems engineer , actually my brother lives in Chile, thanks to his profession, and my parents survive thanks to hard work, and about me I am studying journalism.

Professional Contribution

One from my experience was a time when we were sailing near South Africa and St Helena Islands and lifted up an old telecommunication cable, that was a really hard and dangerous job because our sailors were not professional and we had a serious risk of injury or even death that time I was first signed as Chief officer and frankly speaking I was not the best the first days, but during our voyage and especially in the last months I think I took to most new skills and made a good team. The ocean really makes extraordinary individuals.