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    今天晚上我吃了鳗鱼饭。酷夏(如果你想要表达“炎热的夏天”可以用酷夏)

    今天晚上我吃了鳗鱼饭。苦夏的时候日本人喜欢吃鳗鱼。应为 (因为)日本出产的是两倍贵 (要贵两倍),所以在超市我买了中国出产的两条烤鳗鱼片           如果换成“两片中国出产的烤鳗鱼片”会更好①如果是烤鳗鱼,量词用“条”②如果是烤鳗鱼片,量词用“片”更好

    。把这条在烤架烤了两分钟以后切得 (为)两厘米。在米饭摆上这个,浇上山药汁吃。我女儿们很喜欢吃。

    汉语表达的相当不错[emoji][emoji],接下来注意些小细节:

    ①汉语中关联词的使用 例如 因为……所以; 不仅……而且

    ②量词的使用 一条鱼 一片鱼片

    ③定语的使用,特别是多项定语的使用 

    多项定语的排列顺序一般是:表示领属或时间、处所的;指名称或数量的短语;动词或动词短语;形容词或形容词短语;名词或名词短语(带“的”的定语要放在不带“的”的定语之前)


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    July 30, 2017
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    想要进(。ò ∀ ó。)
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    July 25, 2017
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    may I join in ?I want to practise english,and I can help others to practise chinese.
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    July 25, 2017
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    great!I wanna in 
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    July 25, 2017
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    Find a lanuage pratice partner I'm a chinese college student pratising english recently.But my english is really poor,so I want to a language partner who want to partise chinese and english native languager. I need you help me with english partice ,and I can help you on chinese learning in return. I am looking forward to make friends with yours
    July 25, 2017
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    Find a lanuage pratice partner I'm a chinese college student pratising english recently.But my english is really poor,so I want to a language partner who want to partise chinese and english native languager. I need you help me with english partice ,and I can help you on chinese learning in return. I am looking forward to make friends with yours
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    我今天在家

    今天我在家。现在十二点, 我很忙。我现在在学汉语。我写字词,听录音。
    ​另​外我看书。
    我今早上吃了炒饭和蔬菜。我喜欢蔬菜, 我不喜欢水果。我喜欢在商店买菜。附近有超市,  去超市                                       然后

    每天我超市去。我往前走,以后我往右拐。我    那儿

    在哪儿买很多东西。我买蔬菜,米,面包, 面条,谁和茶。菜在哪儿​便​宜。     

    提几点学汉语上的ideas:

    ①中国人说话是比较喜欢倒置的:比如你第一个错误(我也给你改了)我今天在家

    ②有时主语是可以省略的,比如你第二个错误

    ③多注意连接词是很重要的


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