My Trip to Bhutan (31)

The town of Thimphu‼️ There were so many cars and buildings. In other towns I visited this trip, it was hard to find a building which had more than three floors. Some buildings were still under construction, so the number of buildings will increase in Thimphu.

However, I noticed there were mountains without trees too... The trees might have been used to construct buildings.

My biggest struggle

Fearless people are so admirable! I struggle to be that person, but it is too difficult. In my high school, I used to feel too shy to talk with people and make eye-contact while speaking with them. Especially strange people who are not close to me. When I went to College, I decided to be another person. I Pushed myself to ask my professors any question when I didn't understand. I had friends too. I liked my major so much and I have been getting good degrees. In my point of view, Being a brave person is such a wonderful thing because you can learn anything. You can make many mistakes without worrying. Besides, you can learn a lot. In short, only the fearless can be great!

Describing a picture. Writing for the school, thanks for your help!

This image is a photograph that was taken in the cinema and shows five young people watching a film. They are in their twenties. The film seems to have already started, because the entire scene is dark except for a bright light in the background, the film projector.
The main focus of the photo is the girl sitting in the center, who is watching something through the mobile phone.
In my opinion, she is in a bad mood, perhaps his boyfriend is angry with her.
Neither the boy sitting on her left nor the boy sitting on her right are watching the film. Apparently, they prefer gossiping about her phone.
The young boy who wears a white t-shirt and is eating pop corn, might be his brother. This is because they look physically, especially for their curly hair. Moreover, he looks a bit angry, maybe about something he´s reading in the girl's mobile phone. In the background, there is a boy smiling, so I think he is the only person who is enjoying the film.
This photo reminds me of my youth when I went to the cinema with my best friends. We did a lot of other things instead of watching the film.

Good job. I am not sure what you wanted for the highlighted word. One thing to watch out for would be "run-on" sentences that stretch too long. I find breaking them into 2 sentences is better.