Based on the 2015 PISA report 2015, the Canadian educational system is ranked among the best in the world. The Canadian top-ranked universities and the  international conferences which are frequently held over there means Canada has access to the most brilliant mathematical minds in the world, due to its top-ranked universities and its frequently held international conferences. The sophisticated educational system values creative minds and provides the right conditions for young mathematicians to flourish. Also Moreover, Canada is a multicultural society and Canadian universities accept students from all over the world. In a multicultural society, Due to Canada's diversity, I would  will be able to enjoy learning from people and students with different backgrounds which mean to me who have new and interesting perspectives, and to contribute my own experience as a foreign student as well. So a After my graduation, I stand a good chance to be highly qualified at my subject. Also In addition, I am interested in learning languages, and four years of living in Quebec is an incredible opportunity to learn French and master English.

<em>Comment: I hope this is helpful! For the most part, I made stylistic changes to make the paragraph sound more natural. Unfortunately, I do not understand what this sentence means within the context of the paragraph: "So after my graduation, I stand a good chance to be highly qualified at my subject." To be clear, I believe I understand the meaning -- you are saying you believe you will succeed in your academic program -- but it seems like a non sequitur, disconnected from the rest of the sentences in the paragraph. I think this issue can be solved by adding more detail to this sentence or adding another sentence or two on this topic to make the point clearly.</em>

In my opinion, this is possible, but on a decent distance for the most part luck cannot buy get people all they want. First of all, people have to understand that even the most basic things in which they want to succeed require effort. Most activities need constant practice and the improvement of skills, only this way will it be possible to ensure the development in a chosen sphere. Especially This is clearly seen in sports as sportsmen athletes should must maintain the level of their performances for a long time, which definitely has nothing to do with luck. Another point is that event the spheres in which luck can have a highly positive effect on people’s activities, like business, in order to maintain their the upperhand which they have gained by luck, people have to try very very hard. Only by combining luck and hard work will it be possible to save maintain the beneficial effect benefit which that they get received accidentally. However, on a in the long run it is almost impossible to distinguish luck and professional sense.

Finally, no one should rely entirely on luck, as this is something that cannot be controlled and people without developing a person who does not develop their skills and knowledge base would will have a hard time with the growing in their chosen sphere. This should be taught from beginning in primary schools, in order to instill in children a love for education and make them to avoid cheating, as this would have absolutely detrimental effect on them.

To conclude, in spite of the fact that many people prefer to see the success of others as a plain luck, often this is not true. All people have to work for their success and even if we do not like some successful people personally, they should be given credits for their hard work. Even with luck people have to work really really hard in order to maintain the level of their success and develop it further.

<em>Comment: good job! Note that "on a decent distance" is not a common or natural phrase in English. I substituted "for the most part," which i hope preserves your original meaning. Also, "in the long run" is a fixed phrase in English. Last, in spoken English it is common to repeat words like "very" or "really" for emphasis, but this is too casual in a written essay for school, work, etc.</em>