위에 이미 답변을 잘 해주셔서 그냥 몇 마디 덧붙이고 싶네요. 도움이 되길 바랍니다.
I just want to add other expressions you can use, here. I hope this helps.
1. 오늘은 어제보다 더 기분이 좋네요 - Today I am happier than I was yesterday
2. 다음 달 칠 일에 친한 친구들하고 만날 거에요 - On the 7th day of the next month I am going to meet with my close friends
2. 제 양말에 작은 구멍이 있어요 - There is a small hole in my sock
3. 제 남동생이 어릴 때, 울보(a person, maybe a kid who cries often, crybaby)였어요 - When my brother was a child, He couldn't stop shedding tears
I, as a native Korean, can understand these sentences easily, so I think you did pretty good work. And as for the last sentence "어떤 도움도 감사하겠어요." , it sounds a little bit unnatural to me. I totally understand what you mean, thou^^. "도움에 감사드립니다", "도와주셔서 감사합니다" would be fine if you want to say "Thanks for your help."