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i want to achieve three goals .firstly, i want to write a book. secondly,i want to study in europe country. eventually, i want to have a family and children belong to me.Hi Olivia! Please see below for my corrections. And best of luck with your goals in life!
I want to achieve three goals in life: Firstly, I want to write a book. Secondly, I want to study in Europe. My final goal is to eventually have a family with children of my own.
0 votedAugust 25, 20170Word practice 08-24
Message
1 She left a message on the table for her son.
2 Give Send me a message if once you goget home.
3 She sent a message to her son that she will be late.
Eat
1 Eating vegetables is more healthier than eating meat.
2 I eat some fruit every day.
3 I like eating chocolate.
Heat
1 Warm the milk to blood heat. (I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to say here! Can you please clarify?)
2 The sun sends forth light and heat. (This sentence seems correct to me, but it's very uncommon to use "sends forth")
3 Be careful of the heat from the fire!
Fry
1 I love to eat eating fried vegetables.
2 Shall I fry the fish for dinner?
3 We fry eggs on in a frying pan.
Apologize
1 I am apologize for my careless behavior fault.
2 He knelt down and apologized to his wife.
3 You must apologize to your sister.
Driver
1 The driver got out of his car.
2 She climbed into the driver's seat.
3 The driver wore red clothes when he went racing.
Shoulder
1 I must wash my shoulder carefully when I take a shower.
2 He looked back over his shoulder.
3 I have got a lump on my shoulder.
Ice
1 The ice is melting.
2 Ice is just frozen water.
3 I am going to buy some ice blocks.
Magic
1 Do you believe in magic?
2 There is no magic cure.
3 The man took the a rabbit out from of the magic hat.
Mask
1 He took his mask off and looked very different.
2 I am the mask you wear. (What were you trying to express with this sentence? :) )
3 A thick, grey cloud masked the sun.Hi Shaji, let me know if you have any questions about my corrections!
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