IELTS WRITING PART 2 Each year, crime committed by young people is on the rise. What are the reasons? Suggest some solutions. The crime rate of young children is rising each year. Unrestricted violent content and poor education are two main reasons for this problem. Therefore, controlling violent content which is proving for teenager from government and taking more educational responsibility from parents as well as school are two suitable solutions. Firstly, there are lots of unrestricted violent information in today’s media such as violent movies in Internet and TV shows on televisions. All those violent contents are easy for young people to find or search, which can lead young people to try to copy what they see on TVs and other medias. Because young children are weak at telling right from wrong and lack of self-control, they can’t recognize what they try to do is violence. So, their violent action would not stop in a short time and this will cause the rise in the crime rate. On the other hand, some parents are not into their educational duty to keep their children from violent information and criminals. They don’t care about what videos or movies their children watch, what computer games their children play and what friends their children make. At the same time, schools, which concerning on academic ability, are also spend few time to educate young people to stay away from violence. Without the monitoring from parents and schools, children are in contact with those violent content, even directly with bad guys, much more easily. This can also cause the rising rate of the youngster crime. In order to decline the crime rate of young children, government should restrict violent media according aged ranking and Implement punishment to someone who provides violent content to minor. And schools and parents should take up their educational duty to keep young people from violence. Parents should care about their children lives and know what information their children receive. Schools should set some course to explain what violence is and how to prevent it.