#IELTS#(Please correct it , thank you)Describe a tall building in your hometown you like or dislike

You should say:
Where it is
What it is used for
What it looks like
And explain why you like or dislike it

The tall building I would like to talk with you is a shopping centre called Golden sunshine, which is located in the centre of my hometown. Talking about the appearance, generally, it is a 30-storey modern architecture which looks like a tower. The designer of the building did a great job in combining simplicity and creativity together, which makes it very eye-catching.
Regarding my feelings, I love this building in several aspects.

In the first place, it combines a range of functions, which makes it possible for people from all walks of life to do various kinds of things there. As I recall, there are a lot of luxury stores on the first and second floor, like DIOR, Prada, in most cases, as a student I seldom consume there. While I often visit the seventh and eighth floors, where are full of a wide range of restaurants, from local delicacies to foreign food like western food and Japanese food. During weekends, I sometimes go to the gym on the ninth floor in order to work up a sweat.

Apart from that, the staff there is really patient well-trained. I can still remember that once I forgot my bag in an Indian food restaurant, after 15 minutes, the broadcast made an announcement about it. Eventually, I got my bag back in the customer service centre.

In general, this building left a lasting impression on me, and I would like to share it with you.