The Village. Part 2. "Before the semi-final". Please, correct my mistakes.
I don't know what the heck
had drawn drew me to go swimming
on one cold April day. Anyway I caught a cold so I'm
not won't go
ing to Liverpool
anymore. Lying in my bed I imagine
as the bus
is going up travelling on the interstate
to take part (who is taking part? It's not clear) in The North West Counties Cup semi-final game. Ah, the game will be going without
me my participation! A few hours later I'm getting
tired to lie bored of lying (suggested expression) in bed. I leave my flat and go to our field. When I approach the field I see Pavel, sitting on the central
trubune (I'm not sure what this means). He has played for our club for several seasons, but I've almost
not never ta
ckled to him
for all this time. He seems
the strange
person to me.
"Long live world revolution!"
, I
joke try scoffing at him.
"Very funny! Did you imagine this yourself or
did someone suggest
ed it to you?"
, Hhe answers.
This moment I notice
that he
's hold
ing a tablet in his hands.
"Are you watching a movie?"
"No, I'm going to watch the game.
?"
"Let me guess. Arsenal-Chelsea? Or Liverpool-Watford?"
"
More like tThe second
version is closer. I will watch the match with Liverpool
's participation. Another Liverpool."
"How did you manage?" (What are you referring to with 'manage'?)
"I just know where to look
for.
The Internet is
a powerful invention
."
. "I want to watch the game too."
"No problem. Let's go to the pub. It's getting cold and rainy."
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Interesting story so far! Overall, the English usage is good. Most of the corrections relate to tense, choice of word and punctuation. Hope that helps.