Hello everyone, Please have a look at my IELTS academic practice exercise. I would be super grateful if could check it for mistakes or anything that sounds odd and needs rewriting. Thank you in advance. You guys are great! "A glance at the charts provided reveals the striking fact that more than a half of world oil resources are situated in the Middle East while only 6.15 percent of it is consumed annually in that region. It is evident that the main oil consumers in the world are Asia with impressive 26.21 percent of world annual consumption, United States with the result which is very close to China, and Western Europe consuming 19.24 percent. Those countries combined own just 6.11 percent of planet’s oil resource. It is remarkable that Eastern Europe has almost even levels of consumption and resources. With the regard to Canada, consumption figures are much lower than in for example its neighbour United States. Conversely, Canada is in possession of appreciable 14.84 percent of world petroleum resource. Also noteworthy is the fact that Australia and New Zealand are keeping the annual consumption at low level of 1.31 percent, which is wise as they only have a fraction of a percent of oil supply at their disposal."

Thank you in advance "人間のアイデンティティは何ですか？" "人間関係は何ですか？"