Could anyone correct this paragraph please?
Japan's work force needs to be
retrained reconsidered for
more increased effectiveness. However, I am a bit worried
that if Japan tones down
the intensity of its work force
training, the quality of work
that they
do have kept will
get lower decrease. The quality and
fineness excellence of everything
that they do is
part of what something that Japan can be proud of. Hopefully, companies can increase
the labour force, then decentralise each person's roles, so
that they can have more
time off offs. However,
since the population is decreasing,
and such, so it's this is another issue
that needs to be addressed to be discussed. Thank you very much in advance.
You're welcome! :)