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    Practicing my english

    I often read the posts of my english speaking friends that english speaking, in on Facebook. I almost always understand all the posts , but is very difficult when they are talking. most of the time, I don't understand anything. They talk really fast. they speak very speed. I have friends in USA, Philippines, Ghana, Kenia and Japan. Many time Most of the time I can understand when speak my friends in USA, but is very complicated when I speak with  am talking to my friends in Ghana or kenia, they have different a phonetics different.

    Thanks for reading and correcting


    "they speak very speed" could be " They speak very quickly" , but in casual conversations we usually tell people they talk too fast.

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    June 30, 2017
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    Cosmic emanation

    Cosmic emanation

    In ancient times, the ancestors used myths to tell a complete theogony and cosmic origin of the whole world. In these stories, they told that the universe had different phases or transition times. This song is about how the universe was created according our ancestors. describing the fihizca like the primigenia force and universe that it give the engige to all elementary energies that built the cosmos in all phases of the divine creations.

    In the deep of cosmos
    In the oniric space
    Behind the dark eons
    The chaos unbind
    The soul of universe
    Had a blew of life.

    A sidereal button
    It do a fluctuanting point
    Always dome intwardly
    Creating a hiss Deep
    Snake sound
    That become in light

    The vault’s black door
    It show to you
    The cosmos’s soul
    The primitive birds
    The arcane it show there.

    Incontables temporal cycles
    Elapse indwardly
    Of vibrant hiss
    Born the elements
    They show flying
    Unfold his black wings
    Surf the horizonts
    Fly the black birds
    Forging mountains and souls

    Unfold his black wings
    Surf horizons
    Fly black birds
    Forging mountains and souls



    The highlighted lines are unintelligible. Mainly, I'm not sure how to make corrections because poetry doesn't have to follow grammatical rules. Also, some words look like they haven't been translated or are misspelled beyond recognition.  

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    June 29, 2017
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    Confederations Cup

    Let me tell you all something. I think that the Confederations Cup this year is very boring because the only top team is only good teams are Chile and Mexico. a little bit mmm This is a joke Just joking. Mexico is a normal average team. In fact, Portugal team is nothing without CR7. and I know, I know that Portugal won the final EuroCup without CR7, but I don't think that Portugal cannot could win the World Cup without CR7 and Alemania carry on a team B carrying the B team. I only said what I think. I'm just speaking my mind.
    Cheers and Greetings for from Colombia.


    "I only said what I think" is an acceptable sentence, but it's not something a native speaker would say. "I'm just speaking my mind" is a common phrase we might use in that situation. I don't know enough about soccer to know what you intend by "carry on a team B". I hope my correction is what you were trying to express. 

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    June 29, 2017
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