My opinion about best friends.

Hello! I was thinking a lot about what topic I'lld choose to talk about. The choice dropped upon (phrase not used by native speakers) Finally, I decided to write about best friends.
To tell the truth, I think I never had any best friend in my life. Notwithstanding that I do have lots of friends, I can't call anybody of them so a best friend. For many of these friends, at one time in the past Although, before I believed did believe that  they are  were my the best friend that I had been seeking.
Every of my friends has strange habits or behaviors; I don't know how else to call it. They can envious, and say bad things behind my back. But I get used to paying no attention in it, but inside I feel myself more lonely every time. I can't stop to being friends with them because I think I'll be alone.
Maybe I'm a cowardly girl that I can't say it no to them.
So,  Since I'm only 15 years old and perhaps my best friend or friends are waiting me in my nearest future.  :)

Diana, English is good, some points for phrasing things as a native speaker would are highlighted above.  By the way, once you leave high school, you will meet many more people, and you will be able to choose good friends from a much larger pool.  You will soon not need to spend any times with people who treat you like this.  Plus, people grow up and are not as likely to be jerks as they were when they were younger.  Hang in there.  It sounds like these friends are not nice to you.  Teenagers are notorious for poor behavior.  Things will get better in your near future.

My nNeighbour

I used to have a weird habit when iI was young, which was opening the bathroom’s window and in order to look up at the sky. ,as i I used to live in on the lasttop floor,. specially on the winter but One day iI heard someone screaming out loud and asking for help. , sShe was this my neighbour who hadve a sick daughter with cancer so the first thing that came to my mind is to open the bathroom’s window and in order to see what is going on , as it was the nearst window to the sound.
I saw that the daughter had fainted on the floor. and hHer mom stood in front of her help but screaming .
All of our neighbours ruan to thier flat for to help and they called the ambulance to take the girl to the nearest hospital. , iI remember all of the neighbors couldn’t sleep that day, even the kids. , It was one of the worst days that we ever had.
Actually it was my last time to see herthe daughter before she died .
Every time iI see her parents iI think about her and iI try to figure out how they feel without her being around. iIt’s really sad and heartbreaking to lose her .

Hi Menna, sounds very stressful!  Regarding the grammar, a native speaker would use periods instead of commas more often.  

Diary 30.09.2017 A bottle of fresh, and organic soy milk.

This soy milk is really worth to buying, and it the tastes is the best better than others I have ever had so far. This morning I drank the last bit of it. and I didn’t forget about my family so I decided to restore the storage supply of it by means to bringing two additional bottles of it back home to the fridge. The address of this the shop where I went is a little far away from my home, but for the breakfast s in for the next couple days I still plan on jumping on my motorcycle and come going to that renowned important shop. (renowned would mean famous in history to many people)

This was my first time to go into this store, in and frankly I didn’t know where it <strike>is </strike>was, the only thing I knew was it was a bit far from my home. I am so glad that people have Google Maps nowadays, I can preview the street view<strike>s </strike>before I go. And so, <strike>to </strike>my ignorance about gourmet food is no problem here! I have always got the map!

  

Help with question

Hi, there

Could you help me with a two questions? Please

1) Would you use eliminate or eliminates and "are" or "be" in these sentences

"It not required that the candidate eliminate(s) that candidates eliminate every phonological sign of his or her their mother tongue." 
" Therefore non-native speakers will hardly ever produce these vowel segments. It is fundamentally important that distinctive distances are kept." (I don't understand what you intend to say in this last sentence, so I suggested one possible correction.)

2) Would you use "aiming" or "aimed" to/at in this sentence

The test has been going through an implementation phase, with the idea that it could become to be part of a proficiency exam aimed at/to also test/testing candidates' in written skills."


Thank you very much!

Hello Gabriel!  Generally good and advanced language usage. A few sentence structures are not what a native speaker would use.  Keep it up!  --Suzanne

Playing with LEGOs

Hello, everyone!

Sometimes it's difficult to speak in English on a strictly specialized subject, but children learn through play, so I want to try to speak in English while I'm playing LEGOs with my daughter. This is her favourite game now and we spend lots of time constructing different things out of LEGOs every day. Please, correct the following sentences and answer the questions. I'm not sure about some of them.

Your Teddy bear wants to ride a scooter, but he can't ride your scooter because it's too big for him. (good)

Let's make another scooter out of LEGOs... the smaller one, so that Teddy will be able to use it.

The scooter will have three wheels, a deck and handlebars.

We need a plate like this, but a little bit bigger/smaller.

By the way, how to spell "plate 2x4" in English, where 2x4 is a size of the plate (width and length)? When speaking, you would say, "two by four".

We need a brick. Let's put the plate and the brick together.

Something is wrong. Turn the brick over, so that the knobs are on top/are facing up.

Now, slide them together until you feel a firm click. Click! Good job!

Now, put this brick on top of the red one.

Take the wheels and attach them to the bottom of the plate 

Let's decorate the scooter. We need a tile. It looks like a plate, but it has no knobs on top.

Put the tile on the plate. Wait! Don't put them together. Move the tile a little bit to the right. Now, put them together.

What a nice scooter we have made! Let's teach your bear to ride it.

Thank you very much for your help!  (Overall very good with few mistakes)