Writing Email

Dear colleagues

Every morning I take my lunch box to our work place and put it into in the southern south side of the refrigerator. Recently, I am processing following a diet plan for my lunch, and so I made make a special meals to for myself. My lunch box is yellow, and I put my name label on the cover. I think it is very easy to recognize.

Last A few days ago, when I opened my lunch box, I found somebody had eaten part of the {my} meal. I am very angry of about this. The size of the lunch was calculated. I only can eat half of it. Furthermore, I am on a diet, I do not have other options to eat outside. As a result, I feel very hungry at by the afternoon.

I hope someone could would stop eating my lunch. I already talk to our manager, and he advises advised me to write this email as a warning. If this happened happens again, I would will ask our security guard to look the monitor {monitoring system} and to see who is eating it {my lunch}. eat this.

Thank you
Tim

Very well written. I hope your email resolves the issue!

Yes, thank you Chris for the clarification.

(IELTS) Academic Task 1 - Housing cost in UK

Note: what I found challenging about the topic was that the discussion was about the rate of change, rather than the actual figures of house prices and renting cost. These two use completely different sets of vocabulary, and it's not easy to distinguish between the two especially when you have to work under the time limit.

The chart shows how the rate of change in house prices and renting accommodation rose in the UK over a period of 3 years, from January 2013 to January 2016. According to these figures, we can see that while both increased over time, in overall, the growth rate of house prices was higher than renting even though it started out lower.
The rate of change in renting cost remained fairly consistent throughout the period began from starting at approximately +3.8% in January 2013 and finished just over +4.5% by January 2016. During the period, there were only two slight dips in the first quarter of 2013 and the second half of 2014.
The rise in the cost of buying a house fluctuated much more significantly in comparison. Its growth accelerated swiftly during the first one and a half years started out starting at +3% and achieved {reached} its peak  of {you can do without the preposition if you offset the non-essential clause with commas or parentheses} (over +5%) in the first half of 2014. What immediately followed after was a dramatic drop back to +3.7% in a mere time span of fewer {less} than nine months. From At the beginning of 2015 {should this be 2016?}, the rate of change in house prices regained its momentum and soared back with a growth rate of +4.5% in January 2016. It is also notable that in the last year of the surveyed period, the housing prices and renting rental expense shared a roughly {for consideration, this adverb is not really needed} a similar pattern of change.

Very well done!!

Sports I've practiced

During my entire {In my} life I've tasted tried a lot of sports:
1) Football (it takes took just a year to left leave it. I was just {only} six years old.)
2) Tennis, I like it a lot, but I live in a very small town where there isn't a tennis teacher anymore so I quite quit.
3) Volleyball, I've practiced it for three years and then I quite quit.
4) Two years ago, I started training to run. running and I ran my first half marathon (21km), which was a really good experience, [with some other quart marathons] I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
5) Actually {Now}, I'm mixing weightlifting, gym sessions, outdoor cycling (just for fun) and running, although less than not as often as before.
6) Swimming, just for fun and only at during the summer, because there isn't a climated climatized pool in my town.

Well done!

Help to correct my mistakes in the recommendation letter below. Thanks in advance

Dear Leadership Committee,

I had the pleasure of working with Monserrat {consider using Ms. Velazquez instead of Monserrat} for over two years while she worked as a Procurement Manager at one of the best financial institutions in Peru. Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} started working as a Procurement Analyst. but she learned quickly to She handled all the responsibilities {of the position}, and got up to speed quickly on the tools, and mastered skills sho and she quickly became expert soon on the procurement process. With only one year in the area, she was promoted to take a position of a that required five years’ experience required.
During the time we worked together, Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} was always very professional, and a hard worker. woman who She developed excellent communication skills to negotiate with our business suppliers. She was always a smart and very organized worker and highly self-motivated in her job. From my point of view {In my opinion}, Ms. Velazquez was one of the most value members of the team. by She helped create an excellent {work}environment and kept her team motivated to achieve the its objectives. Her dedication and commitment to work is unquestionable.
I recommend Monserrat {Ms. Velazquez} without reservation. I am sure that if she enrolls into in the Leadership Program, she will do her best and once when she returns to Perú, she will apply all the knowledge she has learned there {in the program} in order to help our community. Please contact me if you have any further questions.

Very well written! I hope she gets accepted to the program!

Can you correct my professional profile please?

A very responsible and hardworking teacher with an excellent attitude, which has been demonstrated by 3 years of teaching experience. This experience consists of working with primary school students, university students, and adults. Passionate about education, motivated, enthusiastic, and punctual. Skilled in designing and providing activities and materials that engage students and develop their learning. Highly qualified in diverse teaching methods in the classroom including media, role playing, brainstorming, guest speakers, presentations, flash cards, etc. Additionally, able to use innovative learning technology in the classroom. Love constructing and maintaining good interpersonal relationships based on mutual respect. Furthermore {consider deleting}, interested in learning new techniques related to pedagogy and languages that support my personal and professional growth.

Well done! best of luck to you in your teaching career!