Running

I was run around my town from 7 am to 8 am with my friend.
There were many up hill and some mansion.
My condition was getting better and better when I was running.
On the other hand I was jealous to them who live in the mansion.
I'll be the well-off man and I'll buy a mansion.

I was running around my town in the early morning with my friend. 

There were many hills to climb as we ran past the beautiful mansions. 

The good new is that my conditioning was improving each time I ran. 

The bad news is that I was becoming more and more jealous of the people who I imagined lived in the mansions. Why them and not me?

Someday, I will be the rich man in the mansion, I thought, watching the runners pass by. 

 

My husband travels to Japan for work, and he told me that people carry their own handkerchiefs that they use as napkins. 

Forbade is falling out of usage. No one would say it. They would use forbid. "She wanted to go to Russia, but he forbid it." 

There is really no appreciable difference. They both basically mean the exact same thing. Both sentences would be appropriate and completely understandable. If you are writing, you would just want to pick one tense and stick with it. "Has been considering" means she has been thinking about it for a while. "Is considering" might mean she just started thinking about it a bit more recently.

30 days of writing in English: Day 21

A very special day

Today has been a very special day for me. I got up very early and had a delicious breakfast. At 10 o'clock, my son got up, and while he was having breakfast,  he explained to me all the verb tenses in the English language. My son Fernando speaks English perfectly, has excellent pronunciation, and has very good command of the rules of grammar. It was very nice to receive this wonderful lesson in English from my son because he knows how to explain things well and his examples make it easy to understand. If he decided to study education, I think he would be a great teacher.

Then my best friend Luis called me to invite me to have lunch at his house. Luis, his wife, and his youngest daughter went to get me a hamburger from one of the McDonalds that is in the city of Quito. Then, we went to do some shopping before returning home. 
When we arrived,  I told Luis that I am currently teaching Spanish on a website called Italki, and he asked me to explain what this website was about.

In the meantime, his wife cooked a delicious chicken dinner with rice, boiled bananas, cabbage, tomatoes, onions, carrots  and seasoned with a lemon, oil, salt and pepper.

When lunch was ready, we sat at the table and shared the food with great joy. We talked about cooking recipes because Luis's wife, Eskeila, loves to cook and I do too. I really had a very special day!

Thank you for your correction!

Can you write out the entire sentence? This does not have meaning on its own.