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    奇怪的故事

    一天,一个穷人找到了一个装满了钱的包(或袋子。他(感到)哭笑不得, 因为如果他留这个包, 别人会认为他是个小偷。 他想了想,决定把包藏起来, 他不想跟别人分享这些钱。你觉得穷人是不是贪心的人?
    傍晚,他在小溪边上发现了一处合适的地方来藏他的包, 于是挖了起来。他挖几次都挖不下去,因为地里有什么东西。当他一看到骨头,就吓跑了。

    他回到城里,他把钱送了给每一个人。看起来穷人不是贪心人! 

    一天一个穷人找到了一个装满钱的包(或袋子)。包子里有很多钱。他哭笑不得,啼笑皆非(太书面化了,我觉得讲故事可能用口语化的表达更好), 因为如果他留下保有这个包, 别人将会认为他是个小偷。人绝对想起来他是一个小偷(我认为consider是认为意思,不知道对不对)。 他想了想,就决定把包藏起来(意思一样,但更符合中文表达方式), 他不想want不要跟别的人分享这些(按意思补充的)钱。你觉得穷人是不是贪心的人?
    傍晚,他在小溪边上发现了找了一处合适的地方来藏他的包(hide his bag), 然后于是挖了起来。他挖几次都挖不下去,因为有什么东西在地里,就挖不到, 地球里有一些东西。当他一看到骨头时,他吓跑了就快跑步。

    当他回到城市时候,他把钱送了给每一个人。看起来穷人不是贪心人!

    One day one poor person found a bag full of money. He didn’t know whether to laugh or to cry, because if he kept the money, other people will consider him a thief. He thought about it and decided to hide the bag, he didn’t want to share money with others. Do you think poor person is a greedy person?

    In the evening near the stream he found a suitable place to hide his bag, started to dig. He dag a few times, but could not dig any further, as there was something in the ground. As soon as he saw the bones, he ran away scared.

    When he returned to the city, he gave away money to everyone. It looks like poor people are not greedy people after all!

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    April 16, 2017
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