A bad day

It was a raining this morning. I woke up early because I had an important meeting with a customer. When I woke up I made my coffee like every morning and while it was being made I took a shower. When I finished, the coffee was made but there wasn't any milk - it was finished. I love late coffee but I hate just coffee without milk, so I couldn't have breakfast.

Then I got dressed up. I had chosen the clothes the night before. When I went to put on my jumper, it was dirty and the stocking was broken. I couldn't believe it.
I chose an some other clothes and finally I went to my car. I got to the middle of motorway when I got a flat tire. I tried to call a mechanic but I didn't have signal and so I called an emergency number.
In the end the police helped me but I didn't get up to the meeting and I lost this customer. I called her to say sorry, but she was really angry.

So I need to have breakfast in the morning because when I don't do this I have a terrible day!

         =A word that had a spelling error which I corrected

         =A word or phrase that I exchanged for something else

         =A punctuation error that I corrected

         =A word or phrase that does not need to be there

Overall, this was very good and very well-written. Your errors are mainly minor and the piece was very understandable.  :)

Find your destination

In this world, we always envy those who have found their destination.They are happy because of they know what to do and get step by step closer to their dream everyday.
Like many people, we are always so confused on our own way so we lives in a shiftless way and wastes our time. What's worse is that we don't know and it feels boring for us. So we should try our best to find the way that we enjoy instead of waiting for it. In other words,we should take the initiative.

I'm fortunate to be one of those people finally. We need to bravely face our fear, not to avoid it. Right?

Younger

Hi

Recently my friend and I went to the cinema to see a new film (I'm sixteen and she is seventeen).
We said the film that we wanted to see, but the seller said that I didn't look sixteen and that they could not sell me a ticket. It was so embarrassing! I didn't have identification documents and I just didn't know what to do. But my friend said "Let's go to the other checkout." and we bought tickets there. I don't know what it was, but it was nice and at the same time "What? I'm not twelve!"

I just hope you will help me correct the errors.

A cliche is something that is overused and said so often that it has lost all its originality. An example of a cliche is "Don't judge a book by its cover". You can also use "cliche" to describe a person. For instance, a type of character in a movie that appears often, like the reluctant hero (Bilbo Baggins) or the Chosen One (Harry Potter, could be described as a cliche character.