Hello, Seven. I will make some corrections here for you.
大家好,我是来自中国的seven,我想与大家做朋友。<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">H</s> Hello, I am from China. You can call me seven. I want to <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">make</s> become your friend <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">with you.</s>
To use Make in this sentence it cannot be in relation to a specific person or people. For Example: "I want to make a lot of friends." or " I want make new friends at work".
However, if you're saying you want to be friends with someone specific you need to use Become or be. These are some examples: I want us to become friends. I want to be your friend. I want us to be friends. I want to become friends with Dave. We should become friends or We should be friends.
Now for this, 大家好,我是来自中国的seven,我想与大家做朋友。A more accurate translation would be.
"Hello Everyone, I am from china, you may call me seven. I want to be friends with everyone." If you have further questions, feel free to ask me.