I want to expand my vocabulary and expression

People say that Japan is one of the safest countries but I don't think so.
There aren't many pick-pocketings or kidnappings. However, there are some people who want to steal personal information and use it to take over my credit card.
The population of Japan is not much when compared to India, United States or China.
That's why there aren't as many bad people as well.

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Yasuyuki-san, overall you did a good job with this entry. Keep it up! Ganbatte ne!

I would love to teach you English! Take care.

Just Started italki

Nice to meet you!
I'm Shungo Kobayashi. I'm studying English.
I can teach Japanese. I'm glad if I can talk in various ways. (I would be glad if I can talk in different languages) or (I'd love to talk in various languages)
I like music and traveling.
Yoroshiku onegaishimasu.

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I am Raj Mistry and I would to help you learn English! Yoroshiku Shungo-san.

Ref: Original Correction Comment

My mistake today

I needed liquefied nitrogen urgently. I called the shop and asked them to pick up the bottle in the morning and bring the bottle back filled with liquefied nitrogen by evening.

After that I filled out the order form and got my boss' approval by using my PC but I wrote the wrong shop's name. I noticed it when I got the phone call from that wrong shop. He asking me "Where is the bottle?"

The bottle had was already gone because the driver from the right shop had picked it up in the morning! I had to apologize for my mistake (you can also say "for placing the wrong order" or "for my blunder") and cancel the order.

                                                                                                                                                                              

Quite a good job there! Well I hope you did not get into too much trouble for it!

If you are looking for someone to teach you, I'd be happy to help.

Ref:    Original Correction  Comment

A Happening In An Airplane Caused A Scandal (Here, using "An incident" would be more appropriate.)

On 9th April (or April 9th is fine too), United Airlines had to make four passengers get off of an airplane because of overbooking, and they said they selected four passengers at random by a computer. However it was said that it might be racial discrimination because they were all Asian people. The airplane planned to fly in the US, so there must have been many non-Asian people in the airplane.

The three passengers got off the airplane without protesting but one person didn't get off it because he had important business. United Airlines called the police to make him get off of it and they dragged him out (of the plane). Some even said that they used a stun gun at that time. He was bleeding from his head because he might be was (we KNOW he was hurt BECAUSE he was bleeding) hurt when he was being dragged by them. It is said that it might also be racial discrimination because he was savagely treated by them because of being an he was Asian people.
What do you think about this happening incident? (it is ok if you just end it with "this" too)

                                                                                                                                                                                                   

Overall, this was a job well done. Good job keeping up-to-date with the recent event/news!

If you are looking for someone to teach you, I'd be happy to help.

It's my first day today

Today, I started itakli to study English. I would like to update my notebook everyday

                                                                                                                                               

Hope you can keep up the level of dedication!

Feel free to contact me, I'd be happy to help! 

The lady lord named "Naotora".

“女城主直虎“ means “The lady lord named Naotora”. It is a story of a female lord before the Edo period. It is a fresh story to the Japanese people, because as far as I know, any lords—the region kings, are almost usually (you can also use "generally" or "almost always") men. Although Naotora was born as an only successor of the powerful dynasty in the region, she is sent to the temple because of being a she was a female and is raised as a nun.
She has had been prevented from behaving as any power for a long time. However, when the dynasty was facesing a crisis of peril, she decidesd to govern the region and becomes became the back of five years old boy's successor (look below) who is her nephew. There might be more female lords in the history, whom we haven’t known so far. I’d like to know more about them if they did exist. I’m expecting how hoping the story goes on.

Did you mean that she became the teacher or caretaker or behind-the-scenes ruler... something along those lines?

Except for the tenses, quite well done really!

Hello world:)

Hi, my name is Miyu.
I have just started studing studying (you can also use "learning") English.

I want to be able to guide in English (do you mean like tour guide or something along those lines?) and make many friends!

Please tell me various things. (Here I am guessing you were trying to say "iro iro oshietekudasai" but "please tell me various things" does not actually have meaning unless you put it in context)
Thank you.

Overall a wonderful job for a beginner!