Über einen Ausflug

Gestern habe ich Hamburger Dom mit meiner Buddys besuchen. Er war echt geil. Der Frühlingsdom hat einfach gerade geöffnet.er ist kein Universal Studio oder Disneyland, sondern ein lokaler Freizeitpark. Wenn es wärmer wird, möchte ich dahin mit meinen Freunden wieder gehen. Übrigens ist mein erster Deutschkurs beendet. Ich bin sehr zufrieden damit und habe viel gelernt. Freut mich:D Ich will beim Lernen immer mein Bestes geben.

Ihr Deutsch ist einfach klasse. Sie haben wenig Fehler. Ich hoffe, dass Sie ihres Lernens wieter fortsetzen und dass Sie nicht aufgeben.

I think you usually say "I'm self-taught".

Could you please check them??

Hey guys. How have you been today??
I learned three new words, “forbid”, ”prohibit”, and ”ban” and made three sentences.

1. My company forbids us from wearing casual clothes during work time.

2. Donald Trump temporarily prohibited the entry of Muslims to the U.S.

3. My mother banned me from using my mobile phone because she thinks it can provide access to online gaming and social media platforms, both of which have the potential to foster addiction .

Ich denke, dass Deutsch sehr wichtig ist.

Deutsch wird im fünf Ländern gesprochen. Fast einhundert millionen Leute sprechen Deutsch. Denkt ihr nicht ? , dass Deutsch wirklich wichtig ist. Außerdem kommen noch viele große technische Entwicklungen aus Deutschland.

new smartphone

I'm finally going to replace my cell phone with another model. I'm happy now since I plan to change my phone model for the first time in a while. On the other hand, I have something I worry about. To tell the truth, I don't know how to use many kinds of the latest functions on this phone. Most of the functions I have ever used are just "taking pictures", "e-mail", "dial" and "Line" ("Line" is a free communication application which is the most famous apps in Japan, I think). So, people may say that expensive smartphones are unnecessary for me but I strive to learn more about the latest smartphones so that I can use them more effectively .

overall there wasn't many mistakes. Keep up the good work.

Jurnal March 24, 2018

This morning, I went to a glasses shop to change my lenses.
I already changed them six months ago but I had to change them again, because my eyesight became worse.
Sometimes I feel scared of the rapid speed at which my vision keep degrading.
My habit is attributed to this bad situation.
I like reading comics and books. Moreover, I always use a laptop, a computer or an iPad for work.
I hope there might be an effective treatment which I can afford  by myself to stop this symptom.

Jurnal March 24, 2018

This morning, I went to a glasses shop to change my lenses.
I already changed them six months ago but I had to change them again, because my eyesight became worse.
Sometimes I feel scared of the rapid speed at which my vision keep degrading.
My habit is attributed to this bad situation.
I like reading comics and books. Moreover, I always use a laptop, a computer or an iPad for work.
I hope there might be an effective treatment which I can afford  by myself to stop this symptom.

اهلا و سهلا و مسا الخير. شو بتسوي؟ اليوم الأثنين العشر من أبريل. بعد شوي رح اروح على البيت اهل مرتي عشان أغسل الملابس.ولما انا هنك، ان شا الله باقدر استمتع،!ممكن العب لعبة فيديو. أنا بتمنالكون مساء حلو ! مع سلامة

هون شو بدي اقول بس بالنجليزي
Hello and good evening. What's up? Today is Monday April tenth. Soon I will go to my wife's parent's house to do laundry. When I am there, if God is willing, I can also have fun and maybe play some video games. I hope you all have a good day. Bye!