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    Since 2001, I majored in Sculptures of Formative Arts for 7 years in the US. I lived in Nebraska, which is in the middle of the US. Although it took 3 hours by car to travel to California, a popular surfing destination, I visited there every year. I remember the first time I saw people surfing the waves when I didn't even know the word "surfing". At that time, I was searching for inspiration as a sculptor and I was absorbed quickly and deeply by the surfing culture. I even lost track of time in California because I window shopped surfing board in various shops. 

    After I went back to Korea, I kept working on my work for 3 years. I thought I wanted to try something that didn't frequent in Korea. In Summer 2008, I tried making a surfing board without any knowledge. Because a surfing board is easy for everyone to make, I collected information from some companies of surfing boards and shaping communities. Also, I sent emails to famous shapers and found answers to some problems I couldn't fix. I made my first surfing board after 1 month's time and effort. It was hard to maintain a livelihood as an artist, so I taught English to children and finally established this studio 4 years ago. Just 7 months ago, I started selling my surfing board for the first time.

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    以下是我就對這篇文章的理解,改寫成如果是我寫的話會寫的方式

    <a href="http://www.dict.cc/deutsch-englisch/Freizeitbesch%C3%A4ftigung.html" style="color: black; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;">Freizeitbeschäftigung</a>en

    Ich gehe zur Oberschule am Wochentage, deshalb mache ich viele Hausaufgaben in der Oberschule. Ich habe wenig Freizeit. Im Sportunterricht finden Fussballspielen statt, aber ich spiele das nicht. Also spiele ich Basketball. Manchmal lese ich Bücher, weil mich Bücher wissen lassen. Am Wochende schwimme ich, aber ich finde das ist schwer. Alles sind schwer am Anfang. Ich mache und singe Musik gern, weil ich finde, dass das interessant ist.

    原本的seit Montag nach Freitag我覺得可以改成seit/von Montag bis Freitag或直接講"周間(weekdays)" 也就是am Wochentage

    aber做副詞不佔位,所以動詞不用提前

    Aller Anfang ist schwer. 我理解成萬事起頭難,所以改寫成Alles sind schwer am Anfang. 也就是所有事情在剛開始的時候都很難


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