Could you help me revise them?

1 Could you please dim the light? I am going to sleep, thank you !
2 We have to do this assignment together , it is the teamwork!
3 look at your way! So that you can avoid to fell down in such chaotic situation.
4 Could you please take that bag for me? I'd like try it on. ( when in a shop)
5 Her mom have already helped prepare a lunch box in her bag, so there is no need to ask her to go the restruant.

Thank you!

 

1. Could you please dim the light? I am trying to go to sleep. Thank you.

2. We have use teamwork and do this assignment together.

3. Look where you are going so that you avoid falling down in this chaotic situation.

4. Can you please hold my bag for me? I would like to try this on.

5. There is no need to ask her to go to the restaurant for her mother has already prepared a lunch for her.  

 

Women'a mind

Today <strike>when</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">while</font> I was listening <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> songs sung by Xueyou Zhang, I remembered <strike>that</strike> when my husband and I just fell in love. He sang a song for me, <font style="background-color: yellow;">and</font> its name was "kiss-goodbye."  He sang it in a very loud voice with deep feelings.The important thing was that he and his last <strike>gf</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">girlfriend had</font> just broke up for a few months! So everyone can imagine what he had suffered the next few hours!  Hahahaha As soon as I think about this,  I will be sorry for my rudeness.  <strike>and</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">But</font> I am also feeling very funny!

My gymnasium

I want <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> write about my gymnasium and my class. <font style="background-color: yellow;">The</font> start of <font style="background-color: yellow;">my</font> <strike>education process</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">school day</font> <strike>also</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">begins</font> at 8:30 a.m.<strike>but</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">However,</font> we <strike>go to</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">arrive at</font> school earlier <strike>because we want</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">so that we can</font> communicate with our classmates, share news, cheer up our mood in the morning<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> and after will be positive and creative. Usually my class has 6 <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> 7 lessons every day<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> 5 days in a week(from<font style="background-color: yellow;"> M</font>onday to <font style="background-color: yellow;">F</font>riday). The girls in our class are very beautiful, clever, hardworking<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> and pretty. The boys in our class are so positive, funny, handsome, and fucking crazy<font style="background-color: yellow;">!</font> Also we support each other in difficult situations<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">W</font>e help each other with our homework and behave <strike>us</strike> very friendly in our school life. We have three PE lessons<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> and also play volleyball<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">E</font>very time it is very interesting, active<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> and cool <font style="background-color: yellow;">(</font>Because our class has very strong skill in volleyball)<font style="background-color: yellow;">!</font> Now our life <font style="background-color: yellow;">is</font> so hard because <font style="background-color: yellow;">we are preparing for</font> admission to univer<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font>ity and for exams in <strike>gymnasium </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> gym</font> at the same time. Each <strike>person</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">student </font>has 2-3 tutors in free time. <strike>Each</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">Although</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">students </font>don't <font style="background-color: yellow;">have</font> enough time for all lessons and homework, <strike>but</strike> we <font style="background-color: yellow;">are</font> trying to be strong and <strike>save our</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">keep</font> positive<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">This is because</font> we u<font style="background-color: yellow;">n</font>derstand that if we <strike>will said </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">are sad, </font>it <strike>don't</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">doesn't</font> help us <strike>and</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">or anyone else.</font><strike>other people.</strike> Despite the load, we <font style="background-color: yellow;">still</font> have many adventures, and we also find time for ourselves and our interests. In the end I want to say "Thank you!" <strike>for</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">to </font>our teachers<strike>. they also help us in all</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">for all the help they give in </font>our troubles. My city has many schools and gymnasiums. <strike>and</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">But</font> if you ask me, "Where do you want to study?" I will answer, "In gymnasium nymber 31."