Stephen Rogers
English
Mar 23, 2017
Thanks for meeting with me today April. You did a great job with the grammar study. You'll be a great speaker in no time!
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最初的梦想
每个人都有各种各样的梦想。有的很容易会实现,有的很难得得到。依我看,如果我们<strike>江河日下</strike>*努力地工作,梦想<strike>越来越得了的</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">会越来越接近的</font>,我最初的梦想就是<strike>有</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">能养一只</font>小猫。*江河日下 means sth getting worse and worse, so it is not proper here to describe the attitude of working.
*老乡 is someone who comes from the same place with you. 家乡 is where you were born.
*all the 动物 here is better to convert into 宠物 (动物 is animals, 宠物 is pets)
Are these sentences correct? (new words)
1. These products have good quality and are very cheap.一个有伟大想法的男人
