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Advantages of Compulsory Insurance (Titles should always have capital letters.)
The Compulsory insurance is the insurance that the government forces people who meet certain requirements to buy, otherwise people will get fined or receive other punishments.
In my opinions, compulsory insurance is has more advantages than disadvantages
Most compulsory insurance schemes aim for protection and are really necessary. Most people are short-sighted, which means that they will try to avoid risk in the short term, but in the long term they will not realize see the risks. However, these risks will affect not only their own lives but also the whole of society. For example, if superannuation is not compulsory, many people may not save for retirement, because the future is far and uncertain, and they prefer consumption and happiness now. However, most people will not have a steady income after retirement, which can increase the burden on the whole family or the government (since people elected the government to improve their lives) dramatically. Therefore compulsory insurance can protect people from future risks that may not be realized by themselves. And the same line of reasoning lies in motor insurance and many other compulsory insurance.
Some compulsory insurances can promote social fairness, since they can protect the vulnerable party. The most typical example is worker’s compensations. Compared to companies, workers are relatively vulnerable. Without worker’s compensation, workers may not get any compensation when they get injured in at work or are in on maternity leave. This is unfair for workers.Therefore, it is like likely a more effective way to regulate the companies to protect employees, because there must be someone compensating the workers.After full stops and commas you must have a space, I have put them in for you.
Some of your commas I have removed as the disrupt the flow. If you have any questions about the use of commas please do not hesitate to ask.
This is an excellent piece of writing using some difficult vocabulary, so well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 8, 20171Just need a correction if it is wrong
Hello everyone!
Could you please help me and correct the following phrases?
1) Let's put on your shoes and go playing on the see-saw.Let's put on your shoes and go and play on the see-saw.
I don't know if 'go playing' is correct. Or I should say 'go to play', 'go play', and etc.
2) Hold the handrail like me.This one is perfect.
I want to ask my baby to hold the handrail like I am holding it.
Thank you for your attention!I hope this helps, Charlotte
0 votedApril 8, 20171Think in English !!?
I listen to English recordings and watch English videos everyday, everywhere.
Every time I try to translate it them into my own language.
You know it is not each word to that you cannot exchange each word, that is always my confusion.:(
One day I watched a video teaching " Think in English only”
It’s great, it inspired me.
I'll try it. First I'll write down all of the indoor nouns, then verbs, then use them by making sentences.
When I wake up, I'll think in english. lol
Maybe it is working. :)A fantastic and entertaining piece of writing, well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20171Mom's Birthday (Titles must be capitalised.)
I visited my parents last weekend with my husband and daughter to celebrate my mom’s birthday. It’s a really boring family dinner party like usual, my husband and daughter played with their smartphones all the time without a word ( same as my sister's husband and daughter). (Use a full stop here to shorten your sentence.) My sister and I chatted about some office politics, meanwhile my mother, the heroine of the dinner party, were was busy preparing dishes, fruits and other food to FEED us even though we asked her not to be that courteous. She seemed to dislike my present, an agate bracelet, neither the cake made by my sister, from which she did not take a bite. Sometimes I thought think my mother and her children are live in two parallel universes with no intersection, same as my daughter and I. So sad...This is an excellent piece of writing with very minor mistakes. I'm sorry to hear about your dinner, doesn't sound fun at all. Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20171Could you correct these sentences, please)
1. Do you know any Russian singers or music bands? Do you like any particular song in Russian? Are Is there any popular Russian music in Finland? Music is singular.
2. From what age did you start to have an interest to in music? Do you remember your first expirience experience connected with music? Maybe your first performance or concert?
3. Do you regard music as your general business? Or maybe it is just your hobby? What do you like to do behind besides music? Any others activities?
4. Who does writes lyrics? Where does autor a song writer usually search the for inspiration? Does it happen suddenly, overnight or is it a painful process?
5. Could you describe your the most remembarable rememberable concert? Why? Maybe there was the a special reaction of from the audience?
6. Do your have a friendship with members of your band behind outside of rehersals and concerts? Is it a strong connection?
7. Do you have long-term plsans regarding music or maybe you realize that it is jist just a temporary period like your youth is?
8. Do your members of your family support you? Do they visit your concerts?
9. How did the idea appear to create your music band? Who did get had this idea first?
10. Whose creativity is closest to you? What song would you like to cover / remix on?This is excellent. Just a few spelling mistakes and knowing when to use 'the' and prepositions, but this will get better with practise. Well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20171Most people believe that the best way of explaining the dangers of committing a crime to adolescents is meeting connecting them with the old prisoners who changed their lives in a positive way after they reached their freedom were released from prison (correct terminology). I totally agree with it this statement because they are the real examples of what with their experience about being in the prison and the life after prison. life is like in prison and how life can be after being released. Especially older prisoners who have spent more time in prison and have more experiences. (Here you can add in your thoughts on older prisoners, this way you show that you have read the question clearly.)
Firstly, by talking with older prisoners, teenagers get the chance to listen to real life stories about prison, which are more serious than they imagine. In addition, meeting with people who have had experience of being in the prison before is a better solution to gaining young people’s trust. For example, It might be a good way idea to visit teenagers in their highschool and give them suggestions on how to protect themselves from the most common crimes around them, such as driving after they drink alcohol whilst drunk.
Secondly, inspite of being in the prison is difficult, there is a significant difference in the people’s lives after they are released. It is certain that living in the jail prevents people from many valuable things such as sharing time with their family, school or work. All these values could be different if those these people didn’t commit crime. To give an example, it is difficult to find a job for an older prisoner, therefore it always affects his/her life and decreases their life quality quality of life.
In conclusion, I believe that teenagers realize the importance of preventing themselves from committing crimes seriously when they come face to face with real examples of people who have experienced prison. and Furthermore, it reminds them that they need to be a good citizen during throughout their lives.I have added in a sentence about old prisoners as the question only mentioned people in prison. Using in spite of: in spite of being in prison when Jason was released he was able to get a job and do very well for himself.You have done very well indeed. This was not an easy topic with very specific terminology used, you should be proud of yourself. Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20173italki
I've been struggle struggling to learn English for about 2 years.
Of course, I can comprehend some reading materials and what other people saying say, just a little bit.
But I cannot speak or write English well.
I think the problem is caused by PRACTICE.
I have little experience to in speaking English.
Therefore I want to learn English more deeply through this 'italki'.
I will meet many people here and talk to them.
Everyone, nice to meet you :DA lovely piece of writing, which does now demonstrate that you struggle with writing in English at all. Well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20171A letter 131
Murmansk
Russia
4th April 2017
Dear Jenny,
I was glad to get your letter. I'm sorry I haven't didn't answered earlier but I was really busy with my work. I'm glad you decided to choose Moscow for your project.
Of course I can tell you about our capital. Well, it's the largest sity city in Russia and one of the largest sities cities in the world. More than 8 million people live there. The heart of Moscow is Red Square. It attracts lots of tourists. Moscow can be called a sity city of students. There are many universities in Moscow.
Сongratulations on winning the championship! Who was your opponent? What was the score? When be will will be the next championship?
I’ve got to go now! It’s time for my favourite TV show. Hope to hear from you soon!
All the best,
AlexThis is an excellent piece of letter writing, well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20170Reading in English
I'm reading my second novel in English. The first one was Brooklyn Follies by Paul Auster, and I liked it very much.
This one is The All-Girl Filling Station's Last Reunion by Fannie Flagg, which is one of my favorite writers.
Reading in an original (do you mean to say second language instead of original language?) language is my everlasting dream and now it comes true. I can't believe I can do it. So that What makes me happier happy is that I feel the pleasure of reading, and I'm not only concentrated concentrating only with on the comprehension. I highlight the sentences I prefer and I want to share, as I do with my native language.
I haven't don't have a Kindle but I employ use Kindle's App on my tablet and it is very usefull. There is a dictionary, and the possibility to create flash cards, which can be used for to learn new words.
What about the novel? I've just started reading it! I I'll tell you about Fannie Flagg and her novel in another notebook!To read a novel in a second language is no easy task, well done, your practise is clearly showing in your writing as it is excellent. Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20175Tourist Information Center (Titles must always have a capital letter)
I'm I have been working at a tourist information center since last year. This job is good for me to practice my English but nowadays I'm getting a bored to with explaining the same thing all the time. I don't feel that I'm improving, both of with the my knowledge of tourism and with my English skills, especially describing things that tourists want to know. It was very pleasant when I first started this the job. I was interested in knowing the tourist information and give giving them it to tourists. It's almost 8 months since I have been working in this job. I have to find the a way that I to keep going with this job so I can improve my working skills and my English. This is one of the reasons that I registered for English lessons in with Italki. I can share my country countries tourist information and study English to be able to explain more in detail.This is lovely writing, and it's great that you've joined italki to keep improving, well done! Charlotte
0 votedApril 4, 20170
