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Bad Attitude Una Mala actitud
Necesito aprender a tener paciencia.

Me enojé demasiado hoy./Hoy me enfade demasiado/en exceso

No debo dejar que la gente controle mi actitud./No debo permitir que la gente condicione mi actitud
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March 17, 2017
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Mi viaje a Andalucia
¡Hola! Yo y mi novia hemos viajado/viajamos por el sur de España la semana pasada. Estuvimos en Andalucía, primero fuimos a Málaga y después a Nerja, una ciudad muy turística de la Costa del Sol. Me he gustado mucho Málaga, <strike>que</strike> me pareció estar como frente a un Miami en versión española. Allí hemos comido muchas tapas, y una paella con marisco que fue deliciosa. Nerja, sin embargo, no me gustó tanto, porque aunque los paisajes eran muy hermosos, tuvimos un tiempo muy malo, y además frío. Por eso, no pudimos nadar en el mar, ni en las piscinas del hotel. Finalmente, hemos pasado / el ultimo día lo pasamos en Frigiliana por su cumple, un pueblo muy bonito con muchas casitas blancas, en las montañas, y por la tarde comimos en un restaurante bastante original, que mezclaba comida española con comida polonesa. El pueblo/ La localidad se llamaba también el pueblo de las tres culturas, nos enteramos durante el trayecto de ida en un trenecito que habíamos tomado para visitar el pueblo, porque en el vivían católicos, musulmanes, así como judíos. Cuando estaba en la escuela, tuve que estudiar español, y entonces yo/ y gracias a eso fui capaz de comunicarme con los andaluces y pedir información. Fue un viaje muy bonito, que nos gustó mucho, pero al final, nuestro vuelo de vuelta a Paris fue cancelado dos veces, y tuvimos que tomar un autocar Alsa para volver a Francia. Además/ Por si fuera poco, mi pasaporte había expirado mientras que nuestros vuelos habían sido cancelados. Después de treinta horas de viaje en el autocar, llegamos agotados a Paris. La gente española de Andalucía me pareció muy agradable. Recomiendo estos lugares de España, y también quiero añadir que todo fue / lo encontré muy barato comparado con los precios que tenemos en Francia.

Muchas gracias por haber leído mí texto.
¡Enhorabuena por la magnífica redacción David!

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March 16, 2017
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Do you consider yourself a couch potato? We live in a sedentary society, so it's not strange that any of us may become a lazy bloke lying on the sofa, watching exciting football/rugby matches, and drinking our empteenth beer. If that's happened, is there any sort of remedy or cure? Or just on the contrary, if we have developed into it, why to change? Why is it a problem? Aren't we happy enough being and behaving like that? We'd better ponder human beings were designed as ordinary animals. Our prosaic body functions must be complemented with another activity, such as physical activity. It's not preaching becoming crazy with staying in shape, don't pay attention anything but your physical appearance! However, it's certain that just only a small amount of exercise every day would greately improve yoy living standards, would enlarge your life expentancy, would prepare you to cope with more difficult challenges, because you won't be afraid of incoming efforts or demanding situations. It would be the carrot and the stick strategy applied to out mindset. Of course, it would required a small amount of effort at the very beginning, but anything compared with the posible outcomes we could obtain. If you eventually decide to give a step forward and try it, don't do it through a drastic change in your habits, try to implement it gradually. We're not in a hurry, be patient, your readiness won't happen a the drop of a hat, but you don't have to carry out a half-marathon the next day either. Cheer up!!!
March 15, 2017
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Problems teenagers face at school: bullying, illegal drugs, and segregation The main goal of attending school is achieving a sort of holistic education, so that an ordinary student will be ready to cope with a complete variety of different challenges all along their life. Common students are, however, usually forced to struggle for "survival" in a hostile atmosphere, rather earlier than expected -at the end of their studies, in their very secondary school. If you are a parent and have teenagers, all the odds are that you will have already become fully aware of this repeated situation. Your children may be targetted by bullying and segregation, mainly when the group of veteran students notice they are slightly different in any way, whichsoever. In that case, those newcomers, or different ones, will in all likelyhood become the object of practical jokes at the beginning, to follow by bullying them and ending up utterly segregated from the students' community. They feel inside the bubble, isolated, separated and at the bottom of the hostile pyramid. Our children immediately ask themselves for the fasted way to integrate with others, they are fully conscious that their dad or mum are unable to work out "their" problem, they live in another planet! How to be able to be accepted? Could it be through becoming even more wicked and vicious than the worst ones? Taking drugs as the evil ones? Bullying others, even more defendless classmates than them? They are in the vicious circle and have too few possibilities to break it, and you, their dad or mum feels powerless to help them. One of the ways to work it out would be to move your offspring to another school, although if they feel segreated again, that time the consequences may be even worse than in the former situation.
March 14, 2017
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How to encourage people to lead a healthier way of life Media continually bombard us with a clear message, the number of overweight people keeps increasing, what significantly affects our life expectancy, as well as the state's health budget. How can this tendency be changed? Funny, original adverts may have almost immediate effects, or why not to trying from the real root, throughout education? Fatness has become such a serious health problem that really demands to implement urgent measures. A media campaign might become the turning point, mainly concerning those fat people on their way towards morbid obesity. Apart from campaigning for wholesome food, that campaign might also recommend physical exercise as a positive routine to include in our daily life. Nevertheless, if we are searching for a long-term solution to this escalating problem - from both aspects, wholesome food and physical activity - we are doomed to trying it with education. It could be the only way, through combining school-teaching and family-behaviour, to make possible to banish our current wrong food habits, and sedentary lifestyle. To sum up, not only should society implement a media campaign in favour of healthier food habits and daily physical activities, but it should also be launched a put-in-motion family and educative drive to achieve permanent outcomes.
March 10, 2017
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