My diary

This note will tell about all of my activities today.
As different day, I got up at half-past 6 a.m. Then I went to the bathroom and washed my tooth brushed my teeth. After that, I went to the place where you can call it is a living room. I rented this room one month ago. That It is a small room with wall a brick wall.
I rearranged all the stuck stuff in my room. Then I started studying English. The lesson today was Amelia Earhart, she was one of America's first female pilots. I memorized one minute of this lesson, from minute 5 to minute 6. That sounds* easy to me.
I also spent half an hour to learn communication in the book: 900 basic communication sentences. I learnt** one lesson in that book.
I left my*** home at 8 a.m. I had a breakfast with "my quang". It's It was very delicious. And then I went to my company****.
I took half an hour in my company at work to read a book. The book named was called Money War of Song Hong Bing.
I left the company at 7 p.m. I went to my English class and performed all of knowledge which I learnt at home before*****. That's It was not good and I got to practice more and more.
I went home at 10 p.m, took the a shower and continued to learn English. Now, I'll go to bed.

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*or "sounded"

**If you are studying British English, this is fine. In American English, it would be "learned."

***saying "my" is not technically wrong, but it's more natural without

****"went to work" is most common

*****Technically okay, but it sounds more natural to say "practiced everything I learned at home" or "tried out everything I learned at home."

In the beginning, when you say "As different day," I don't know what you mean. Do you usually get up at half past 6? If so, you can say, "Like every day" or "As on other days." Or do you usually get up at a different time? Then say, "Unlike other days" or "Unlike most days."

Good job! Keep it up!