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Please check my IELTS writing task 2. Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There is an opinion that governments should provide a financial support to people from modern artist's society who have not achieved a success and are forced to struggle with poverty. I totally disagree with former statement because I tend to believe that the fee earned by artists from their creations directly depends on its value for public. First and foremost the artist is a kind of occupation like an engineer or a doctor. In any profession just highly qualified and experienced specialists get good salary for their work. We can not imagine that governments should ensure an additional assistance to an architect which have just designed an incorrect construction. The artists are not exception. Obviously, the reason why their work do not make a profit in poor quality or lack of experience. On the other hand, basically the artists are creative and ostentatious people. They do not pursue a material goals. Most of them want to be recognised and popular. For this reason the majority of artists, especially untalented and inexperienced unable to sell things they creating and are obliged struggle to survive. Besides, the price that some artist asking for their creatures is frequently high. They fell their things are unique and exceptionally beautiful or skilful. And instead of the reducing of the price the stay poor and unknown. As far as I am concerned it would be unfair to other occupations if any government take steps to resolve the problem of artists' salary. If some of them can not receive huge sums of money for their things this means that they have to make the difficult choice of finding another way to earn a living, no one can alter that fact.

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Cooperation for IELTS preparation Hi there! I want to take the IELTS exam soon. I'm looking for partner to improve my speaking skills. In return I can suggest some aspects in writing task, which I learnt by my IELTS teacher.