The view of men in 1930s

As the intelligent men quickly armed themselves with the 'new-'(new thought, new culture, new life, etc.), their were various conflicts and side effects. The most important aspect was the view of women and the relationship between men and women. Their were no woman in the position for the modern subject, and for those who became the modern subject, were still  looked upon as surplus's,subordinate others, and above all  'ambiguous.' This view of men had been reflected upon the role and the shape of female characters in the modern narrative. The analysis of female images in modern novels written by ‘the pen of male writer(penis)' has been continuously carried out. These results confirmed  the repressive reality of women clearly and repeatedly. This study is also on the extension.

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Yesterday,l went on a job interview.The interviewer asked me to introduce my self in english,l was hesitaton in speaking English.Which made them thought my english ability was terrible.In china I have no one to converse in English to which makes my oral English very poor.I am not certain on ways that can make me improve my English.I can read simple English words and also recite them through a grammar book which made by grammar improve.Though I am not certain on the oral English, please recommend on ways I can improve.