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    Who should pay for the old people's medical attention

    In British culture, it is common for elderly people to reside in an apartment in a shared house because they need care. The expense of medical attention is extremely high. There are some people who argue that it is the family's responsibility to pay for the care fees while others believe that it is the government's has a duty to look after the welfare of the vulnerable. There are some  The reasons for both are the following: as follows.

    For those who think government should pay for elderly care, the first reason is that it is the duty of government to take care of the aged and the weak. NextTherefore, people was required to pay the taxes from their working income, and the government should prepared money for the old people's welfare which is includes medical attention.

    On the other hand, the families are also has responsible to take care of their senior members, the cost of their medical care should be paid charge by the family. In the meanwhile,  If they want to have better medical service such like as to hiring a personal nurse to take care of them or asking a medical institution to provide personal service, the family should pay for it in these situations.

    After considering both arguments, there is evidence to support each side of the debate. The government has a duty to care for of their citizens although families should contribute if they desire to have better quality service. Based on these point, it is clear that the government should provide a baseline of care for people who need medical attention but they cannot afford the expense.


    This is a great essay, congratulations. The vocabulary you used is very accurate and the structure of the text is perfect. However, connective words and phrases are tricky sometimes, until you learn how to use them. Keep writing! Remember: no practice, no progress! Goodbye!!

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    March 15, 2017
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    Conversation in English

    I like chatting in English
    But I can't hold a complicated conversation. I can only hold simple ones.

    I want to be able to talk about deep topics in English. That's why I study hard English vocabulary hard. A dictionary is necessary for me.

    And I also have to practice listening English. Sometimes I can't hear what my friends are saying. Because they speak English so fast, unlike me.

    If I became a good English speaker, English conversation will be more exciting .

    Thank you :)

    Hello!!! Congratulations on this piece of writing. It doesn't have too many mistakes. On the other hand, i'd be happy to help you improve your lstening and speaking skills. If you check my teacher profile, you will see the description of my special classes for this topic. I guarantee you'll feel comfortable enough to speak after we practice together. Hope to hear from you soon! Good bye!


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    March 15, 2017
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    Una cajera muy amable

    Estoy en un supermercado en España. He terminado mis compras y estoy yendo a la caja por  para pagar. En este momento me doy cuenta de que he olvidado mi dinero aen la casa. ¿Qué puedo hacer? No me gusta llevar atrás devolver las compras pero necesito mi dinero.
    Entonces, he empezado* empece hace 3 semanas a aprender español. He pensado quePensé en probar hablar con la mujer a la caja. Le digo que he olvidado mi dinero a la casa. Pero lo puedo traer porque vivo a solo 3 minutos de aquí.
    La mujer a de la caja reacciona totalmente amable y dice :"No hay problema!" Le pregunto si comprende mis frases españolas en español bien. "Si,si " ella responde, "¡bien hecho!" Después he traído el dinero y he pagado mis compras. ¡Felizmente he empezado a aprender español !


    Te felicito!!! Verdaderamente, si esta es tu primera conversacion, lo has hecho genial!! 

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    March 14, 2017
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    Hello! In brief: "To illustrate" refers to the story in a more visual sense, and "to interpret" refers to the meaning of the story told by another person. I think you must say "illustrates" because you are talking about a film. But that's my opinion. Make your choice! :) and keep doing these exercises, they're great!! Good bye!!
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    March 14, 2017
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    A question what asked to  for the native English speakers

    Hi friends, I'm an English learner, now I can write a few English posts, or essays or compositions, I have no idea how to define it exactly. in short To make it short, it's  just is what I'm writing here. Although there always are some mistakes, at least I can take make some communicate with others by text messages, but when I try to do the same thing underby speaking and listening, I foundfind I cannot do that.

    Firstly, I speak too slowly, because whatever I want to say, I need to make a Chinese sentence in my mind first, then I can just translate them into English word by word, therefore, how is it possible that I can speak quickly? Secondly, when I listen to a native English speaker talking, I always want to listen clearly each word, including those 'of' ,'to', 'a', 'the','that' and so on, but no matter how hard I repeat try listening again and again, I really cannot distinguish them from a sentence, so I want to know whether you native English speaker can do it or not, can you tell those words from any sentences? and, if you can, how do you do that?

    Hi! :) I recommend you not to worry about those words when you have a fluent conversation. The most important thing about learning a new language is to communicate, and little by little you will get better. I say "no practice, no progress", so maybe, you have to get more conversational exercises. I'll be happy to help you!! That's my teaching superpower. Goodbye!

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    March 14, 2017
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    Why the preposition In is used here in this sentence?

    As the lady glances round the train to the window, her hands are busy knitting something in the softest pink wool.

    Thank you!!

    Hello!! "knitting something in the softest pink wool"

    The verb "knitting" implies the action of building something with the hands and using a certain material. Therefore, an object is made in the material that is being used. Anyway, I believe this can be an example of a poetic license, in which a writer chooses to go out of the regular use of the language to say something in an artistic way. It can be in or out of the rules, but it's not common.

    Great question!!

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    March 14, 2017
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    One of aim of my learning english  One of my aims for learning English

    English is useful for me, because i need it when i play games on personal computer.

    Well done, but we can try to make this longer!! 

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    March 14, 2017
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    A Postcard: My Town

    This is the a postcard of my town. There are 300.000 people living here. *The best part of my town, in my opinion, is the hills that we can climbing and the grottoes with its their blue water. For those who like nature, there are verya lot of activities like visiting the waterfalls, swimming in the river. Also, there are verya lot of restaurants, pubs and night clubs in the downtown for those who like to have fun in a cool and hip nightlife.

    * I'd change this for: In my opinion, the best parts of my town are the hills.... and the grottoes...

    Overall, this is a great description. Well done!!


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    March 14, 2017
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    Hello!! 1) When you use the article "the", it means that the other person knows exactly what you are talking about. For example, "the flower" is that one and not any flower. Therefore, we must consider this before choosing "the" and not "a/an", or simply not using an article at all. Ex.: I earned money working at a factory. 2) and 4) These are questions. In English, we use the question mark at the end of every question when we write. 3) For this sentence you should change the verb "turns". If you want to say that he earns little money, the phrase "makes some pennies" is a right choice. The article "an" is used only when the word next to it starts with a vowel. And remember, it's ok to say "the cafe" only if the other person knows exactly what cafe you are talking about. Nice job! Good-bye!!
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    March 14, 2017
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    A friendly advice

    The Last week my friend told me that one way to improve my English is to write a little report from the results of the  my English studies of the day.

    Today I read a little part of Smoke and Shadows. It is a comic about "Avatar" the master of all four elements, the bridge of spirits and human world. At In this chapter, our friends go down to dank crypt ushered guided by mash a mad king named Zuko. They started this trip to assemble (gather) with a bunch of old spirits. When they arrived on at the depth of the crypt, their mood were was undermined by  a extrange strange shape in the dark. Zuko receded but Avatar knew what he must to do and without standing idly by, he kicked the spirit.

    Next day more. More tomorrow or More coming soon (if it is not tomorrow)
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    March 13, 2017
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