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Japanese Specialist Shuji
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Feb 22, 2017
I am glad to know that DJWildberger is satisfied with my first lesson. He is eager to learn Japanese, so he asked me many times to confirm his understanding at this first lesson(different to other students). I look forward to having a session with him again.
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    The Grunt War

    Unlike pervasive stereotypes about Vietnam veterans, the majority of them are normal US citizens who mostly participated in the war to do good deeds. Many Americans consider veterans amoral killers. However, the vast majority of veterans never committed such atrocities. Whether they volunteered or were drafted, most of them had to get on ships or flights to go to the war zone. Yet, few of those men actually fell on hard fightings, and only small amount of them actually experienced breakdowns which later lead them to be more liable to commit war crimes. Rest of the troops practiced acts of kindness toward civilians, and what they wanted the most was just going back to home. However, once they got back to their home country, they had to face negative prejudices about veterans. It is true that some veterans did fall into drugs and alcohol, but the vast majority of them settled down without any problem. This shows that veterans are not only fighting with their own scars from the war, but also with the negative stereotypes of Americans.



    Great job EunHye! You have a wonderful grasp of the English language. I did not read the article you summarized, but I will give you some feedback on your summary. 

    I think you meant to say "hard times," which a common English colloquialism. "Fightings" is not a word. The only other thing is that "rest" needs a definite article, so it would be "The rest of the troops..."

    Everything else looks good!

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    February 24, 2017
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    Hello italki

    Hello guys! This is my first time use English to write something on the net. And i want to introduce myself. My name is Souhang, that is Cantonese's Jyutping name. And i want to have an English name. Can you help me? And i come from Macau, i can speak Cantonese, Mandarin and write Chinese. If you guys wanna learn some Chinese, maybe i can help you :)


    Hello guys! This is my first time using English to write something on the net. I want to introduce myself. My name is Souhang, which is my "Jyutping name" in Cantonese. I want to have an English name, can you help me? I am from Maccau, and I can speak Cantonese, Mandarin, and write in Chinese. If you guys want to learn some Chinese, maybe I can help you. :) 


    Good job, while there are some grammar issues, you are understandable, and that is the most important thing! You have a good grasp of English, keep up the hard work! 

    You can say "wanna" if you would like, but I just wanted to make sure you were aware of the formal words "want to." Also, you don't need to add the conjunction "and" before each new sentence.

    I hope this helps!

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    February 22, 2017
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