Just some trial :)

Nama Saya Pauline! Saya Perancis. Saya berasal dari Angers.

it should be :

Nama saya Pauline. Saya berasal dari Angers, Perancis. 

Saya belajar Bahasa Melayu tetapi saya tidak tahu banyak!

Saya suka bercakap banyak bahasa!! Satu hari saya mahu bercakap sepuluh (or more) bahasa!

or (atau) 

more (lebih)

so you can write : 

satu hari saya mahu bercakap sepuluh atau lebih bahasa..

Keep up the good work Pauline! 

taufiq.. it will be great! tq so much. so when do we start?

may be you can do exercises at home first? when you feel confident enough to run by yourself then you can go to a park.. just my opinion. I know you can do it! 

hye Gabriel.. yes. it is totally different from english. can you write in korean?

leonard.. its good to hear that... so you have the chance to practise with them. do you learn the pinyin? or just learn how to communicate in mandarin?

hello machrus.. wow. sounds great. all the best to you! never give up! 

hye leonard.. yes. im sure you can do it! i really hope that all your dreams come true.. are you taking a formal class to learn mandarin or self learning?