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    "Nowadays people are more fit than 50 years ago in some ways. Our living conditions have been increasingly improv<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font>. Most of people have <font style="background-color: yellow;">a better </font>chance to take care <font style="background-color: yellow;">of </font>their health by eating healthy foods, going to the fitness center and taking <font style="background-color: yellow;">medicine </font><strike>the pills</strike>, which <font style="background-color: yellow;">wasn't </font>available 50 years ago".

    p.s. "more fit" is OK 

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    Film vs book (essay)

    It is better to read a book than see a film version of the book.

    Nowadays, people prefer watching a film version of the book instead of reading it and they would probably find a lot of reasons for not spending time to read. One reason may be that they do not have time to spend on it, for this, watching a movie is faster than read<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> a book of 500 pages or more. Another reason may be that they are always tired when they <strike>might have found </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">find </font>time to read. Coming home after <strike>a </strike>10 hours of working, you may not be <font style="background-color: yellow;">willing </font><strike>disposed </strike>to <font style="background-color: yellow;">lie</font> <strike>lay </strike>down on a sofa and concentrate, so people prefer relaxing while they watch Tv or films. Despite this <strike>fact</strike>, there are still lots of people who are addicted to books, and they absolutely want to read the book before the film comes out. Furthermore there are a good number <font style="background-color: yellow;">of people </font>that read the book after having seen the film.
    In my opinion, reading a book has something more than <font style="background-color: yellow;">just </font>watching <font style="background-color: yellow;">its </font><strike>a </strike>film version. You can imagine your own characters and invent the location, it is something personal, and perhaps our version is completely different from <font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font>director’s point of view. And then of course you can <font style="background-color: yellow;">always</font> <strike>also </strike>watch the film Version <font style="background-color: yellow;">as well</font>.

     

    p.s. very good english. Some of my corrections are more stylistic than gramatical. 

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