my writing in english
Hello,
My name is Nadezhda, I'm from Russia and right now I'm working on my writing in English.
Could you check whether I write correctly and give me written recommendations on how to improve my writing:
My favorite season
Winter – I adore it. The weather is cold. I like when weather is cold. I like is strong frosts. I like is white froast on trees. Frozen ground is covered with snowdrifts. I like snow, a lot of snow. I like snowfall and snowdrifts. I like to clear the jard shovel.
Many people go to skiing and skating ring. In some park we can see ice sculptures which are real works of art.
Winter is a magic time of year. In winter we celebrate the New Year and Christmas. This is the time when every person turns into a little boy or girl and starts to believe in miracles.
Winter is a wonderful time of the year.