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I'm preparing IELTS, it's so difficult that I hardly make words to sentences which describes my intentions accurately, although I have memorized a lot of vocabularise. Also, I found that I couldn't use native words idiomatically to express what I want to say in the speaking field.
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    Hometown Hometown Well, I’m come from Shenyang in Liaoning province, an inland city that is in the northeastern of China. It’s a heavy industry city nowadays, and also has a long historical standing known as the first capital of Qing dynasty. Something about tourist spots There are some must-see spots, such as beiling park and dongling park, they were primarily built for the first and second emperor as their lasthome, but now they are for citizens to leisure. And there are also some spots in modern times, for example, dashuaifu, which was once the home of general zhangxueliang, the leader of beiyang warlord. It is worth-while visiting there, if you are interest in history.
    January 19, 2017
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    罗伯特博恩斯节

    罗伯特博恩斯节

    罗伯特博恩斯节是苏格兰得传统节日, 也每年一月二十五号有一个重要节日。博恩斯是苏格兰得最有名得的诗人。他是1759年出生的和是1796年死了他出生于1759年,卒于1796年。他写了关于苏格兰的生活和老百姓 他写了一些关于苏格兰生活和老百姓的文章。他的最有名的诗在英文叫“To a Haggis.”在中文Haggis叫香羊肚。 他最有名的诗叫做“羊香肚”,英文叫“To a Haggis”。

    香羊肚就是苏格兰得最有名的菜。这个菜是用羊肉和羊下水(羊的肚子)里面一个羊得肚子一起做的。好像看似不好吃,但是我可以告诉你它很好吃!香羊肚是博恩斯节的时候一定要必吃的东西, 所以每年的一月, 每个商店会买卖香羊肚。 跟香羊肚你也应该吃蔓菁和土豆你也可以用蔓菁和土豆搭配香羊肚来吃。 在英文土豆叫“potatoes”,但是在苏格兰我们叫它们 “tatties。”这时是因为苏格兰有它的自己的方言。其实所有的博恩斯的诗被这个方言写的。其实,所有博恩斯的诗都是用这种方言写的。

    苏格兰人认为在博恩斯节的时候,应该家人应该在一起, 所以恩斯节的在这个时候,苏格兰人总是一家人在一起吃饭。 吃了饭以前,苏格兰人常常宣读朗读博恩斯的诗,以后之后,大人可以和喝几杯的威士忌或者跳一个段传统的舞。


    hi young lady, what I modify could make the essay more native in Chinese. keep practice.

    你好,美女,我所做的修改可以是你的短文更加地道,更容易被人们理解。

    生词 -
    Luōbótè bó ēn sī 罗伯特博恩斯
    Lǎobǎixìng 老百姓
    xiāng yáng dǔ 香羊肚
    màn jīng 蔓菁
    xiàshuǐ下水



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