I'm writing a text to the PET (Preliminary English Test exam). Will you help me?

Dear Mrs. Lake

When you <s>come</s><s> </s>came up with having a party to celebrate the end of the school year, I <s>had been</s>was so excited! It would be a great way to finish our days together <em>with a flourish. (A bit strange here)</em>

However, in my opinion, we have to hang out in a different place, not at school. We should go to the park! There is a large green area so we could use it to play soccer, volleyball and video games.

If we <s>had</s>have a party in the summer, our food<s>s</s> and drink<s>s</s> should be fresh and delicious. So, I think ice cream and juice would be <em>a good shot! (A good shot is another way of saying a way to be - here it's a bit strange)</em>

Thanks, Mrs. Lake. See you soon!

Steve Jobs' speech

I want to give you some information about a video that I've recently stumbled upon <s>into</s> on YouTube. It's about 3 stories from Steve Jobs' life and I would like to tell you about the first one. It's about the connection between dots. The speaker thinks that every event in our lives <s>will</s> relates <s>in</s> to the future. Steve had chosen an expensive college and spent all his parents' savings on courses. But he didn't like discipline that was <s>teached</s> taught in these courses and he decided to drop out <s>from</s> of college. It was a tough time. He lived in a friend's dorm room and returned coke bottles for 5 cents. One day Jobs intuitively dropped in to a calligraphy course. This accident turned out to be priceless later on. He learned about serif, fonts and typefaces. The speaker found it fascinating. This information helped him to create the first Macintosh.

If Steve Jobs hadn't dropped out <s>from</s> of college, he would have never dropped in course of calligraphy and figured found out about serif, subtle fonts and typefaces. If he hadn't refused<s> from </s>to study the required subjects, the world would have never known about Apple. It turns out that it is easy to capture this connection not by looking to the future but looking backwards years ago. <s>Every person </s> Everyone should be <s>confidence </s>confident about his gut feeling, curiosity and intuition. Your happy future worth your worn path.<em>?</em>

My first english diary

This is my first English diary. It was supposed to be done two days ago but today I finally made up my mind to write this down. Recently <s>I'm </s> I've been learning English again! Unlike the several times before, this time is for real! I think I've learned <s>insistence </s> perseverance throughout the last few days. AlThough it <s>could not </s> hasn't gone as smoothly as I thought it could, <s>be,still</s> I'll still give it a try. There might be some grammer mistakes in this <s>artical</s> article that I <s>didn't</s> haven't noticed or <s>even</s> had no idea about it. After all, this is my first step <s>on </s> in writing.There <s>are </s> is a lot of knowledge waiting for me to discover which I'm looking forward to. So far I think I've done a nice job by <s>took</s> taking this step. It's 22:40 <s>PM</s> and I'm a little bit tired so I think It's time to sleep

A text to practice my English!

Hello everyone! How are you all?

I am writing this text only <s>for</s> to practise <s>practicing</s> my writing but as you can see, there is no topic.

Today I <s>have</s> read <s>in one</s> a note I had from a couple of years ago. This note <s>prayed </s> said that in English, when you are using the imperative, the prepositions are put at the end of the sentence, like:

- I have to clean my room.

- Clean it then!

I did not remember it, so I am happy <s>of reminding it</s> to have been reminded/ happy to remember.

I have written a new note saying: “If you don’t know how to use the prepositions at, on and in, study them then!

See you, I hope you all are good.

Is this right?

A fishmonger with sharp wit can earn money as well as a rich man.

or

A fishmonger with sharp wit can earn as much money as a rich man.

can you help me to correct this eassy？

There <s>were</s> was <em>(news is uncountable so we use a singular verb)</em> a lot of shocking news about depression last year. Many celebrities have committed suicide because of depression.

<s>It contained</s> This included Korean female star Shirley. Depression is a neglected mental illness,

its severity is often underestimated.

According to reports, more than one hundred million people in China suffer from different degrees of depression. What an amazing <em>(amazing has a positive connotation, so doesn't really work here!)</em> number! Unfortunately, less than 10 percent of people with depression are diagnosed and treated effectively in China. I don’t know what this number is in other countries. I think<s> behind </s>this reflects certain social problems.

Chinese young people are under great pressure. Stress comes from their job,

<s>finance </s>financial circumstances,marriage and so on. Everyone tries their best to survive.They live in a tense atmosphere <s>even have no time</s> don't even have time to settle down and read a book or listen to a song. China is still a developing country which has made a great progress economically, it still <s>have </s>has a lot of work to do. China was an imperial state until the end of the Qing dynasty, ancient Chinese traditional thought and culture had a great influence on modern China. China needs time to change some of its old concepts and establish and improve a new social system.

Whatever,I believe everything will go in a good direction.

The advantages and disadvantages of distance working and learning

In the modern world, the Internet allows more and more people to work at home and learn online. Distance working and learning brings both positive <s>effects</s> and negative effects.

On the one hand, people can benefit from distance working and learning. Distance learning provides students with more freedom and choices. They can study at their own pace by going back over the information to acquire a proper understanding. It also helps students to develop their self-learning skills and think more independently.

The Internet can help businesses to reduce costs. For example ,business partners in different places can reduce travel costs by having online meetings to discuss their plans and problems. Companies can also save the costs of office spaces by enabling telecommuting employees. As for employees, working at home helps them to achieve a good work-family balance . As a result, they can spend more time with with family members.What's more ,employees can save money on transport costs, which helps to reduce traffic jams.

On the other hand, some side effects produced by distance working and learning <s>also can</s> can also be seen. It reduces interaction <s>for </s>between students while they can form close friendships with their classmates in traditional classrooms. Workers who work at home have less opportunities to have face-to-face discussions with their colleagues, which may reduce efficiency .

Although distance working and learning has some negative impacts, I believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It provides people with more freedom and choices.

History and science books.

It can be argued that, in the current days, reading a wide range of books <s>have</s> has a huge impact in the ways we maintain relationships with each other. Despite <s>of</s> this, recent research has shown that lately, history and science books have <s>lately</s> increased their sales. So, what do <em>they</em> make <em>it</em> so appealing? (Meaning here isn't very clear - who makes what so appealing?) This burning question is open to debate.

There is evidence to suggest that people have always been interested in history in order to comprehend where modern society comes from. This may be one of the relevant reasons for the <s>increment</s> increase of history books on websites and bookshops. <s>Although,</s> Even if you have access to the internet, where you can obtain any data about history, it seems <s>unquestionably</s> unquestionable that books provide details that the web cannot offer to you.

It is also the case of science books. Even though the internet offers you a great number of websites related to science, where you are able to download books and reports based on science, the sales of science books have lately become a crucial theme in the times of the coronavirus. It seems that people <s>are</s> have decided to contribute <s>in</s> to their sales with the simple aim of transmitting the importance of this subject to the government.

In view of the above arguments, both sort of books are merely <em>(check meaning here)</em> necessary. Nevertheless, as a consequence of the current worldwide situation, there is <s>a</s> strong evidence to believe that science books are more important <s>that</s>than history. <em>Where it would be the history (not sure what you want to say here - where would history be?)</em> without the discoveries of science represented in books?