Grammar check plz Could you please let me know if there is any writing mistake in the below article: I used to work for xx bank as a Retail Banking Consultant. My main job is problem-solving for customers and selling financial products. Every time, before I served the customers, I need to confirm and update their details, such as physical addresses, phone numbers, emails. After I served the customers, I also need to update their profiles with our conversation and newly completed transactions, which include home-loan, insurance, credit-card limited. I understand it is critical for the bank to collect and update their customers’ data. From analyzing its database, a bank not only can get more in-depth customers insight and offer better service and products, but it also can predict the market trend and the country’s future economy. I never worked in the Data/Business Analysis field. Still, I am always curious to know how an analyst collects, filter and analysis the database and then makes a valuable and viable business recommendation. In 2018, I also ran a retail small business. Through the whole business process, I strongly relied on data collection and analysis to complete my market research, strategic planning, and customer acquisition and retention strategy. During my entrepreneurship journey, I also eager to learn how other Tech startups optimize their databases, combine with Machine Learning and AI to predict customers behaviour or even influence and manipulate customers’ decision-making. Today, I am a big fan of the big data, and I believe, soon, for enterprises to survive, they should be data-driven and digitalization. The most important point I took away from the first-week class is the factors influence decision making. Data can contribute to decision-making. But data also can have bias. Now I am curious to learn how we can avoid or reduce those data bias in the future.

Grammar check plz 1. Thanks for your support and kindness during my difficult time 2. I have relocated to San Francisco last month. Could you please let me know if the above sentences are Grammarly correct?

make an oder depends on its importance ? is this right English?

Grammar check plz Hi xxx, When I talked to xxx regarding the new Advisor role from your company xxx, he passed me your email address. As a passionate supporter of making positive social impacts and New Zealand Economy, I would like to submit my application and here are what I can immediately bring to the table: 1. Consultancy skill and delivering high standard service: My experience working as a real estate consultant, and as a banking consultant in xxx, has given me strong experience in relationship development and has helped me to develop a consultative and a client service approach in everything I do. 2. Global mindset and working well with cross-culture team and clients: My business and data analysis education, along with the ability to speak three languages allows me to be capable of operating successfully in many different professional contexts.

Grammar check plz This is so true:"...because they have more wealth behind them..."Also, for the customers were born in 80s and 90s in China, because of the one-child policy, they get more support and resources from their families

Grammar check again plz " It is a shame, I won't be able to say goodbye today. Could you please pass my farewell to him - I want to say thank you again for all his little help for me while I was a newbie. Every time I "grabbed" him, he always came to help out. I will send him an email later too. Regards xxx"