Filled out! Best of luck :)

NBA about The Golden State Warriors

I'm from Saint-Petersburg. I'm 28. I wish would like anyone will to correct me. And I find language exchange.

Yesterday I watched an NBA match between the  Memphis Grizzlies and Golden State Warriors.
Why GSW is my favorite club? No For me they're better than any other club in others sports. They're better than Barcelona in Football.

First,  because they seek out the best moment for the attempt. And,  Of course, because of Stephen Curry. When I played some basketball near the beach when I was 16-18 years old,  I enjoyed 3-point shots. I was affected by Stephen Curry and Klay Thompson's accuracy, when I saw their splashes last year.

Not too bad but just remember that in English we capitalize the letter I when speaking about ourselves!

This is correct. Corny is much more informal. Cliched is a more formal way of saying the same thing.

Introduction on edX

My name is Max Mustermann. I'm 18 years old and studying International Business at the University of Applied Science in Munich. For going studying abroad I need to pass the IELTS test with a good result. Right now my English level is good but could be better. I will work hard here on edX in order to prepare for the IELTS test.

*I changed the real name, age and studying place

viel Glück on die Prüfung :)

I would use "Investing". It sounds more natural.

My cats

A year ago I didn't have any cats so I decided to adopt one.
One day, my neighbor knocked at my door and asked if I wanted a cat.
She had a yellow one and a black and white one.
I picked up both of them and brought them home because I wanted my boyfriend to help me choose.
It was very difficult because both of cats were very beautiful; We decided to adopt both and we named the yellow one Calvin and the white and black one Xikita.
After a while, a strange white cat appeared in my home.
In the beginning she was very angry; She always beat Xikita.
Despite this we decided to adopt her as well and we named her Lola.
After some time my neighbor also adopted a cat.  However, this cat became friends with my cats and usually I have 4 cats in my home. The neighbor's cat is sleeping in my picture.
Today I love cats... They are lovable, clean and beautiful.