It's pretty good, I would just put in a comma after 'sleep' to add a rest.
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December 2, 2016
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They sound both normal, and if you were speaking to someone and said that, they wouldn't freak out or anything.
Except walking in a street. It would be on a street.
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December 2, 2016
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Where might I have noticed it before?
Where could he have disappeared to?
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December 2, 2016
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The device tries to connect itself with the server, using it's socket (or plug they mean the same thing.)
Sorry the english language is so hard ~_~
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December 2, 2016
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"Noone special, why?"
Asking why gives you an idea of what they want to know.
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November 30, 2016
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Assuming 'he' is John, it looks good to me!
"You shouldn't (can't would be a better word) marry him, are you crazy? He's got a wife, but John loves you...