I myself learn korean through kdramas & kshows. It does help ^^

Are these correct sentences?

She wants to show the picture to her grandparents when she goes back to Japan next month. (this is better)

Please correct these sentences.

I admire Ken.
Ken, needless to say, lives in Japan, he speaks and writes Japanese and English fluently. (better not to use the word "and" more than once in 1 sentence)
I think it is not because he's genius, but the fact that he is a hard worker.

Are we blind?

Something is happening around me. It seems like there is Somebody who controls everything, who has His own plan and does not even think of sharing it with me.
But everything changes as fast as fall has changed into winter, and rain into snow. And I don't want to waste my life nor time. I do want to live, to be useful for people around me. But there is no one.
I stood up, came to the window and noticed that there is nothing other than the cold snow and wind.
Where are you? Why had you dissapear? I am tired of loneliness or solitude.
I want to turn around and see your happy face, but there is no one to smile.
The old poster on my wall, cold furniture and a mirror.
Breathe. Ten, nine, eight.. they say it helps, but it doesn't

"such as" is usually used to introduce examples meanwhile "like" is used to show similarities. casually people use "like" also to introduce examples, but in proper grammar, it shouldn't be used that way. 1. Can you buy me some fruit like apples or grapes? the above sentence is WRONG because it would mean that the speaker does not want apples or grapes, instead some fruit that is similar to apples or grapes. 2. Can you buy me some fruit such as apples or grapes? the above sentence is CORRECT. apples or grapes are examples of the type of fruit which the speaker wants.

Sharing a story about "BF"

Long time ago,
A little boy said to a little girl " I am your BF”，
the little girl curiously asked " what's BF"?
The little boy smiled and replied " It is Best friend".

Time flies, when they grew up, they fell in love.
The boy said to the girl " I am your BF",
The girl was very shy and with a blushing face, she asked " What's is BF ?"
The boy kissed her face and gently replied " it is boy friend".

Several years later, they got married and have kids.
The husband smiled to his wife and said " I am your BF".
The wife stopped doing housework, smiled and asked " what is BF ?"
The husband looked at their kids and replied happily " it is babies' father"

Then, they are old and can't go anywhere. One day, the old couple laid on the wicker chair and enjoyed the warm sunshine in winter.
The old man said to the old woman " I am your BF",
The old woman with wrinkled smile asked " what is BF?"
The old man watched the setting sun and red sky, replied with a strong and old voice " it is be forever".

When you're old, if someone still stands with you and take your hands and walk to the end of life dear?

How to Enhance Our Sense of Happiness

Nowadays, we can see the following phenomenon:
Young people are less happy than before.
Economic growth is not in the ideal proportion of satisfactory.
Technology widens the financial differences in the society.
As the proverb says "Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort."
In contemporary society, people are exposed to multiple choices and we discover vastly different lifestyles.
Happiness is when you forget to do your homework and the teacher is absent; Happiness is a window seat on a bus; Happiness is microwaved popcorn; Happiness is rain dripping in your hand; Happiness is standing still quietly in the breeze; Happiness is a family reunion after years passing.

Would you please check my sentences?

1.All our money are used up, we couldn't afford to stay at a hotel.
2.You can work on your coaching ability by organizing children games, where you can help as a referee.

Thank you.