we saw a horrific car accident today those clothes look horrendous on you it is a horrifying idea to be without work

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We are so glad that intellegent and smart Tom found time for visiting our center. Moreover he brought his friend Ann to us. Ann is modest but very friendly as well. Ann is modest but also friendly
We are also glad to have such clever and sharp-witted audience, who asked lots of questions of our guests.
Thanks to Tom's narrative we knew not only his personal story but lots of historical facts and huge amount of things about life in USA.
Tom is a very open person who is ready to contact everyone. So use this chance to be a friend with a guy from California. (????)
Off the record, the word "squirrel" has two different pronunciations in Am.English and Br.English.
Continue to visit our knowledgeable and strong-minded meetings and get the brains God gave a squirrel))

Colleague from Hell

Once I read in BBC learning English the story about colleagues from hell. I thought that wasn’t about me ( I thought this could never happen to me). I haven’t colleagues from hell before in our beauty salon come the new hairdresser (We never had a "colleague from hell" before in our beauty salon until the day a new hairdresser started) . She ruined whole our life (she ruined our whole lives). We call her green evil, because her hair dyed in green color (because her hair is dyed a green color). Our salon is for respectable clients and green hair is little strange here. But it is not very important, maybe we need some creative. (maybe we need someone with such creativity/maybe we need such creativity)
She invites few clients in same time. (she books clients for the same time) They crow in hall (they cause havoc in the hall), speak loud, put everywhere cups with tea and coffee. We can’t hear our clients and speak with them (we cant hear our clients speak). She hung on (she hung on the walls) walls a lot of her diplomas and magazine clippings. Each of us got many diplomas, but we hung only must important or new (each of us have diplomas but we only hung the most important for our clients to see). Our light white hall became like сlouse and stuffy. And she makes many acts than contracting of professional ethics. (she acts outside of our professional code of conduct)
I have my own room, but, when I had a free minute, I liked to go out in hall (I liked to go out in the hall). If somebody was free too, we could drink a cup of coffee and chat about family or something else. Sometimes we asked for advice about work and invented new project (created new projects/discussed new projects). Now I don’t go out. After work I don’t stay in work no one minutes, I run to home instantly. (I run straight home)