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    Another Reason

    I was thinking why I correct the other people here in italki,* and wrote my thoughts* in my notebook the other day. The reason why I correct or give some advice,* is to help people and feel satisfaction for myself. After posting this*, I noticed one more reason. It* is because I want to know people's ideas* from* around the world. You might say that* I can read books, newspapers, websites* and so on to get some ideas. But it is something different. I can't explain how it is* different. That is my homework for my* next notebook.
    Thank you for reading.
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    November 23, 2016
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    Violent sports

    Banning violent sports is a highly debated topic in today's society. I think violent sports should be banned.
    Firstly, violent sports such as boxing teach kids to use their fists instead of their words. Children watch them on TV and see this as a patter*n* of behaviour. Secondly, people get seriously injured doing *these* sports. Lastly, *I believe* sport is an activity for pleasure and relaxing, not for hurting each other.
    However, some people think violent sports shouldn't be banned. They *say* that a lot of people love violent sports and violent sport is a successful *sporting* career.
    But it's not like that. Violent sports are not as loved and attractive as they were, for example, ten years ago.* Accordingly, they gain less and less money. There is no reason for not banning them.
    Of course, there is no wrong or right opinion, but from my point of view, they should be banned.*
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    November 23, 2016
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