"I would be grateful if you could take a look AT my text."

"Into" implies "(going) into" there is some type of action involved going from the outside to the inside. "Within" is synonymous to "from inside". You are already inside.

"This is the first study of its kind to find discrete evidence that our need to bond with others, actually increases our openness to engaging in homosexual behavior." The comma here is a mistake. There should be no comma. I will try to rephrase this sentence to maybe help clarify: The study found evidence that demonstrates that our need for bonding will increase our willingness to engage in homosexual behavior.

No. But you could say "your proposal seems to fit our requirements pretty well" or "your proposal seem like a good fit for our requirements"

-"As" in this sentence means "while" or "at the same time as". -"They" includes Fern and her mother. -"Were" is the past tense of the verb "to be". To make it easier to understand, you can paraphrase it as: Fern said "where's Papa going with that ax?" while she and her mother were setting the table for breakfast.

Quand on met de l'eau dans notre vin, on le dilue. Ainsi, cette expression veut dire qu'on dilue nos exigences. On se modère, on adopte une position un peu moins radicale sur un certain sujet.

The context: usually, during the holidays, you are able to receive a pay even if you do not work. This is called holiday pay. Here, they are saying that even if you do not take your holidays and go to work, you will be paid normally; you will not be able to get an "extra" pay from the holiday pay. The only way to get your holiday pay is if you take a holiday. "老师无权收到工资来代替他没有休假的工作时间" Sorry, I'm a banana so my Chinese isn't the best, but this is how I'd translate it.