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Winter in Kazakhstan
Hi everybody! I want to tell you about the <font style="background-color: yellow;">current</font> weather in my country<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> Kazakhstan<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>. at the moment</strike></font>. Now <font style="background-color: yellow;">it</font> is winter and it's very cold<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">T</font>he temperature <font style="background-color: yellow;">is </font>about 20 degrees <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>sub</strike> below</font> zero. Usually<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> there is severe northern winds <font style="background-color: yellow;">that </font>blow with the speed 10-20 metres a minute. <font style="background-color: yellow;">The s</font>oil <font style="background-color: yellow;">is</font> covered with <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>thick layer of snow and it looks beautiful<font style="background-color: yellow;">ly</font>. <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>At</strike> On</font> the first day of winter we celebrate<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>d</strike></font> the holiday of the First President of Kazakhstan Nursultan Nazarbayev. I<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>'ll</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">would</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font>be <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>glad </strike>happy</font> if you <font style="background-color: yellow;">could </font>correct my mistakes and <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>write </strike>show </font>me how to write it more grammatically <font style="background-color: yellow;">correct</font>, thank you<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>). </strike></font><font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: inherit;"><font style="background-color: inherit;"><font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font><font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font></font></font></font></font>
<font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: yellow;"> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">Great writing Meiram :)</font></font></font>
0 votedDecember 3, 20161Clothing
The male overcoat is long and <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>hot</strike> warm</font>. A very good fashion option for <font style="background-color: yellow;">people </font>who want<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>s</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>go over of</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">more than </font>a simple coat. It offers a beautiful visual and <font style="background-color: yellow;">will </font>warm you when you are on the street in <font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font>winter<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>and</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">Y</font>ou can take it off <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>in closed environments</strike> when you are inside</font>.
There are overcoats of many colours, but the <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>most</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">majority </font>are in neutral colours like black, white and <font style="background-color: yellow;">b</font>eige. Modern people can <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>use</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">wear </font>other <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>kinds of</strike></font> colours as well. It can match with <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>blue shirt, black trousers and ties.
The overcoat is very famous abroad. But<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> in Brazil<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>it’s coming of shy way</strike> is not as popular</font>. For the luck of the Brazilian people the fabrics are <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>factoring it </strike> being fabricated</font> according <font style="background-color: yellow;">to </font>our weather. It’s a great opportunity to use it when we go to a restaurant or <font style="background-color: yellow;">to the </font>theatre.
This visual is very popular<strike> </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>in</strike> for </font>the business man, but its <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>used</strike> popularity </font>started with American movies from Hollywood as <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>we can find it in uncountable</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">they are found in thousands of </font>movies <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>done</strike></font>. Brazilian people appreciate overcoats over <font style="background-color: yellow;">other</font> European fashion <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>in</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">fo</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">r the</font> winter.
Sadly, <font style="background-color: yellow;">they </font><strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">is </font></strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">are</font> very expensive to buy<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike> it</strike></font> in São Paulo due <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> our hot weather, but <font style="background-color: yellow;">they </font>might <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>to</strike></font> be cheaper soon. The traders usually don’t import many <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>units </strike>coats</font> as the manufacturers don’t make lots of them<font style="background-color: yellow;">.</font> If <font style="background-color: yellow;">they send too many</font> thousands and thousands of overcoats will be left over.<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">I hope my corrections helped. Keep up the great writing :) </font>
0 votedNovember 30, 20161Do robots make human lives more comfortable?
<font style="background-color: yellow;">Robotic</font> technology has developed more than ever before.<font style="background-color: yellow;"> <strike>and</strike> It</font> is said that nearly half of the jobs people are doing now <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>would </strike>will </font> be replaced by robots in <font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font>near future.
Do robots make human lives more comfortable?
The answer is<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> partly<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> “yes”. We don’t need to suffer from sever<font style="background-color: yellow;">e</font> blue-collar tasks <font style="background-color: yellow;">such as </font>manual, simple and boring labor<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>s</strike></font>.
<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>But </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">However,</font></font> I think the development of robots <font style="background-color: yellow;">does</font> limit<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>s</strike></font> human<font style="background-color: yellow;">s'</font> choices of <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>their</strike></font> occupations.
<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>One is</strike></font> “<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">H</font>ighly intelligent <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>worksjobs</strike></font>” <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">such as</font></strike>; <font style="background-color: yellow;">involving</font> creat<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>e</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font></font> new products, market research, management of human organization<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font>, <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>renovation</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">development </font>of present systems and so on <font style="background-color: yellow;">cannot be replaced by robots</font>.
<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike> These are fields which robots cannot replace.</strike></font>
The other <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>is</strike></font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">types of jobs that cannot be replaced by robots are </font>“jobs taking care of people” such as; nurse<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font>, teacher<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font>, caregiver<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> and so on.
We prefer human warm hearted <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>cares</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> humans who care</font></font> rather than robots programed <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> care<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font></strike>.
On the other hand, for those who are not intelligent enough to win “highly intelligent <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>works </strike>jobs</font>” and don’t have aptitude to do “jobs taking care of people”, what kinds of jobs <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>are still</strike></font> remain<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>ed</strike></font> for them?
If you have any idea, please <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>give </strike>leave </font> me a comment.<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">Awesome idea Miki, keep up the writing!</font>
0 votedNovember 30, 20160
