Essay : Smoking is harmful to society

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Tobacco is a drug which has been known for a lot of years ago. Probably, all our grandparents smoked because it was a tendency and legal drug. However, is it necessary?

Firstly, each year tobacco kills many people and it does not only kill smoker people but tobacco attacks smoker people's families and friends because they are always near them and breathe the smoke.

Furthermore, the lung cancer is the most important cause of death in countries like Spain or The United Kingdom. In spite of this, tobacco is legal and governments do nothing. On the box of cigarette we can see written ''Smoking kills' or important pictures of ill people but it does not change anything.

Nevertheless, people keep buying tobacco. What is more, young people buy tobacco. Teenagers can't buy tobacco but it is known that they do it as we can see them smoking at the streets.

my opinion that nobody should smoke and I think that all governments should do more things to get a better population with healthy lives.