How to write an Email? Help needed!
Hi! I wrote an business email to my partner, but i am not sure if the writing is proper or not, hoping someone could help me to correct my mistakes and writing tone. THX a Lot.
Dear Amy,
Thank you for your prompt reply. I look forward to further work with CCL, while detailed information are needed to prepare for the next steps.
1.There is no problem with login to the website you provided, but we cannot view the Youtube video, we would really appreciate it if you find another way to send it.
2. Now we are trying to organize 1-2 teams to join FPSPI Competitions in June 2017. It is the first time so we want to have a document to guide us to prepare for the competitions, information including: the calender of preparing for the competitions, the upcoming and previous competition topics, the requirements of the contestants (junior high school students or senior high school students, individual or team competitor), and fee required for students to join the FPSPI Competitions.
3. In order to better understand and prepare for FPSPI Competition, we need a detailed brochure containing general information of the competition, its purpose, history, features, sponsors, schedule and so on. It would be really great if we could have videos of FPSPI Competitions in recent year.
4. "Creative Problem Solving CPS Summer Camp" in July 2017 is tentatively fixed in Beijing and Chengdu for 10-12 days. If we invite CCL to train our Summer Camp teachers,how many days are required? How to carry out the training sessions (on-site training, online training, or skype)? How many teachers of CCL could come to China for the CPS Summer Camp? And how do you charge?
Looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much for providing the requested information.
Yours sincerely,
Adele