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Hi guys! Could you help me with my writing ?
After the third debate the world froze. Everybody is waiting for the culmination of this breathtaking race Where the strongest leader will win. However, a lot of people just don’t want to go to the polls and want to ignore the election. Nowadays people need a new world leader due to the fact , that citizens are left with a lot of questions for current leaders. Today’s leaders require the best traits. They should be trustworthy, analytical, and well balanced.
Trustworthiness is one of the most important Qualities mankind possesses. Some days ago one of the world leaders, the King of Thailand passed away. The people of his country are crying even now. This man did a lot of good things for his nation. The country trusted him and was thankful for him in all of his days in government. The current leaders should be trustworthy and every step of their work. Every action they take must be clear and understandable. Their performance as a leader should be admired by the people.
Next, the analytical thinking is a crucial quality of personality these days. There are plenty of tasks a leader must complete and problems the leader has to solve every day. Furthermore, this type of personality directly connects with logical thinking and leads to the ability to quickly find an effective and optimal solution in any given situation. There is actually an interesting fact that logical and analytical thinking are saved to a ripe old age, until such time when the brain is atrophied one does not lose the capacity for rational study of the world.
Finally, I will talk about one more pivotal quality. A leader must be well balanced. A great example of a world leader who successfully presented this quality is Indira Gandhi. This great woman could do incredible things with the help of her harmonious approaches towards the government in India. It is really important to stay calm and dignified in front of common people and in front of other countries at any given time.
In conclusion, all of these qualities will improve and refine every country in the world. Every country is waiting for trustworthy, believable leader who can give people A good life and confidence in a good future.I've Just corrected this to the best of my ability, Hopefully this is helpful! Things in red are revisions, I have removed the mistakes.
0 votedNovember 8, 20160- 1) Cars do have more than one break. Kind of like how bikes have the break for the front and back tires. 2) It means he ran over to where she was being attacked. 3) "Admitted to being." and "Admitted being." are both fine. admitted TO being is more correct. 4) Yea, it is a natural sentence.0 votedNovember 8, 20161
I will start write my diary. > I will start writing my diary, or, I will start writing a diary.
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Thanks for reading this notebook.
So I will start write my diary.maybe.. > I will start writing my diary, maybe.About my yesterday. > For this you could say a couple of things. "About Yesterday." or maybe, " About my day yesterday."
Yesterday I wake up at 7am. > Wake is present tense, so this is a mistake. When you use wake its more like..." When I wake up, it is still early morning." Here are some things you could have said here.
"Yesterday, when I woke up, It was 7 A.M." or " Woke up at seven." and it would be understood.
Then I did learning English lesson at 7-8am. > It seems you are just a bit confused with phrasing things, but it is understandable to a native speaker I promise! I have a couple ways you could have said this.
" After I woke up I took an hour long English lesson." "Then, I did my English lesson from seven to eight." "Then I took an English lesson from 7 A.M to 8 A.M
It finished later I went to my office.It spend time for 1hour. > I am not sure what you were trying to say here. But, It seems like you were trying to say you went to your office after you did your English lesson for one hour. If that is what you were trying to say, here are some ways you could say that!
"When I was finished with my English lesson, I went to my office." "After my lesson, I went to work." "After the lesson, I went to my office."
I little busy yesterday at work. > It seems you are missing words here, I will put down a few suggestions!
" I was a little busy at work yesterday." "Work was a little busy yesterday."
I did ate lunch 12:00 > You almost had this correct. This is the proper tense! but with I did in front of ate, it is incorrect. It would be, I did eat. Here are some suggestions for this sentence!
" I ate lunch at noon. " " I did eat lunch at 12:00." "I ate my lunch at twelve."
I came back my home. > You could just add one word. "I came back to my home." Here are some other suggestions.
"I came back home." "I got off work and went home."
I did learning english lesson at 10-11pm > I already wrote about this mistake!
I went to bet.I slept. > I went to bed, Or, I went to sleep would have been correct here.
Thank you reading my about yesterday!! > I already talked about this as well.0 votedNovember 8, 20160- I'm not sure of the outward context of this sentence but I assume that this is something about children's interaction with each other. I will make the sentence more correct for you. What this sentence has is called poor word choice. While there are thousands of confusing ways to put things that are grammatically correct, not all of them are the best idea. Ill rephrase this sentence now, to the best of my ability, so that you can better understand it. The Child's ability to discern the goal the other child is trying to accomplish, is the key element in instrumental helping. let me know if you have any questions.0 votedNovember 8, 20160
- That, that appeal is about to come to an end. You can use the words back to back like that, but generally people don't do it very often and it isnt commonly seen in literature. I will give you some examples to help you understand. I have been waking up really early, and I am worried that that is not good. This means the same thing as... I have been waking up really early, and I am worried that waking up really early is not good. Almost as constant as the appeal of the book has been the worry that that appeal is about to come to an end. Means the same thing as... Almost as constant as the appeal of the book has been the worry that the appeal of the book is about to come to an end. whichever makes you more comfortable is perfectly understandable. People that are native to English even get confused by these things, if you have any questions let me know.0 votedNovember 8, 20161
- Ill give you some examples. I like to skateboard. ( this means the same thing as, "I like to go skateboarding." ) Skateboarding is dangerous. I like to skateboard, but I fall a lot. ( You could also say, "I like to go skateboarding, but I fall a lot.") I bought a new skateboard. Skateboarding is fun, but my skateboard isnt very good. (Yes! you can use both of them in one sentence!) I used to go skateboarding. ( you could also say, "I used to skateboard.") Which one you use really depends on the context. If you have questions let me know.0 votedNovember 8, 20161
